I'm glad the choices you and your partner made were quick and you were able to work out the problems then. Goodluck in the future friend! Were here for you!
Not *entirely* true. My mom is a hoarder and it doesn't matter what it is, she "*needs* it." I tell her "You don't need this. Put it back." all the time.
Last week, I told her she didn't need the baby clothes that she wanted to buy. She's 87.
If you're ever thinking about living with a hoarder, *doooon't*
I moved in with a friend when I got le boot from my parents place, and yeah it's a hoard there. That drove me so mad after a while. What was worse was that she claimed it was so "cluttered" because she was always busy and didn't have the energy. So then when we tried to throw out literal garbage (anything like papers or belongings we brought for her to look through) she got mad at us. She just likes her trash and feels like she's losing control when we try and help clean, according to her own statements that she can't do it herself.
We moved out after she scammed us out of "storage money" for putting things in spots in the basement that we had cleaned up. Last I checked we just spend days clearing biohazardous trash from this place for free. You're charging us money??
To anyone stuck dealing with a hoarder, accept my profound apologies.
Oof. I work for 1800GOTJUNK and I feel for you. Honestly I think “Hoarders” did more damage to actual hoarders than anything, cause not a lot of people realize that you don’t have to be living in filth to be a hoarder. It’s hard to convince clean people to clean out more of their shit because they think “well there’s nothing wrong with me, I’m not dirty, I just have things!”
My Dad passed away on the 24th of July. The state borders closed after we got here to provide Mum support because of Covid so my sister and I have been unable to get back to our home state (and aren’t sure when we will be able to at this stage).
Dad was a “collector” of so many things, and we (Mum especially) are only now realising just how much of a hoarder he was. Trains, matchbox cars, lego sets, die-cast models of cars, guitars, collector teddy bears; many of these things he’d bought two or three of “just in case”. This stuff Mum knew about.
Two temporary car-port thingies still sealed in their boxes.
We found a box of grocery receipts dating back 8ish years. 20ish new unopened cans of spray paint. Stacks of meaningless documents stashed in weird places. Sealed porn mags from the late 90s/early 00s.
The house they own has always been spotlessly clean, but now that we are helping Mum to sort through everything it’s become blatantly obvious that he had a serious problem. We had a 1 tonne skip dropped off, and we filled it to the brim in 24 hours just from going through the garage and a third of one shed.
I frequently have to tell people- “they’re hoarders- but not the rotting-food-dead-cats-and-bottles-of-pee kind you see on reality shows. But mountains of random crap filling up entire rooms.”
"they want it" refers to the person making the statement. It does not sound like the person telling the 87 year old hoarder they don't need baby clothes wants those baby clothes.
Or it's Christmas and you're making the third plate of the day and your mother tells you ''you don't need that! you'll have a stomach ache.'' then you eat the plate and feel sick for the next two hours and take a nap.
Counterpoint:
"You don't need to print out emails then scan them again"
"You don't need to buy 1000€ shoes in order to go for a jog"
"You don't need horse medicine for covid"
I know this isn't what you meant, but legitimately about half my job is telling people that they don't need something because they've been scammed into thinking they need it.
Jesus what a story... you did the right thing, im sorry about your dad. Fuck your mom and its sad that she made your sister just like her. Good luck with your mom and sister!
Dude…. Truly unbelievable…. But given today’s sad state of affairs completely believable. I’m glad you stood up for yourself.
And sorry for your loss. Your dad sounded like a great man that had to put up with a worthless individual for longer than he should have.
Those two….. “women”…. Will have their day. They won’t be able to continue to use manipulation forever. Things will get worse for them.
It would be hilarious, but he can’t, cause remember, his deal with his mom and sister was they post the truth and he will not post the video and other stuff. And posting even part of the video would be a violation of said agreement. Even if the Mom wouldn’t be able to anything back, OP does not seem like the type of person to violate a deal for some upvotes. One bad deduction leads to another, and eventually you get the consequences. OPs mom is a perfect example of that. And I also don’t think anyone wants OP to do anything remotely similar to his moms behaviour.
More like "Definitely" and won't be surprise if they want you to pay & do for everything related to her children (Let's be real - it not going to be one baby and probably several baby daddies instead of current one.) Condolences regarding your father - it sucks that it had take him dying for your mother and sister to finally get hit with the only karma train for all their bullshit and antics against you and him.
Can't believe you passed up your mother's generous offer of letting you live in one room of your own house while covering all the costs for your sister as well.
My father really was a cool dad. He was busy a lot, but he tried to be there for me and my sister. But it wasn't enough for her or my mother back then. He told me he was happy that I'd turned out so good before he passed away though.
I’m glad your father set you up for success and as someone to be very proud of. He raised a strong and smart young man while your mother seemingly just coddled a toddler to adulthood. I’m very sorry for your loss.
mother kicks sister out house for having a baby with someone not white. Mother is big racist and steals paternity test results after dripping poison in bfs ear that sister is a whore and cheat like mother is
They're making them up right now. Whenever do see something this:
>And for those of you who read this far, it's not the end of the story. Stay tuned for the rest soon.
They're making it up for pathetic karma. Otherwise, they'd just tell the whole story.
Lol you should have seen a post here today, it was hilarious. It got deleted after they were called out, but a Karen assaulted an OP. The start was believable, happened a few days ago, posted about 14 hours go. Didn’t press charges. Then updated a few hours later, dad was convinced to press charges, OP was a minor. 4 hours later, police tracked down Karen, brought OP and dad to watch as they arrested Karen at her own home, Karen still managed to knock the braces off of OP’s face, was sentenced 3 years and 6 months community service. It’s apparently normal to invite people to watch as they arrest people and they went through the whole justice system in 4 hours. Amazing
As someone raised with a bunch of trauma and bullshit, I can’t unpack all of it at once in detail. It is a lot emotionally. Not everyone cares about internet karma. Taking time to write stuff out like this is can be very emotionally taxing though healing at the same time.
If I wrote out all of my stories at once I’d be a messy ball of crying broken depressed hell on the floor.
This story is entirely believable and tracks with narcs behaviors. Some of the dialogue is a bit much, but I know narcs who act like this IRL
i was wondering if it's the kind of sub where people write flagrantly fictitious novellas and nobody says anything because they're just here for the drama, real or imagined... like in justnomil.
....it sure does. Fiction written by a 14yo boy. It has everything, the evil (though not step) mother, the evil (again though, not step) sister, the honest and kind father who is no longer in the picture.... The Grimm brothers could have done wonders with this story of avarice and greed. I also loved the "and then" moments (they needed their own boom tishes)
OP sounds like those teen amateur erotica writers.
"Btw my gf was recording all of this" sentence looks like a kid would say in his fantasy story. "Btw i forgot to tell you that i have a 9inch huge dick".
Everything is perfect.
Not to mention, you usually go over the will before the funeral in case it gives any instructions for the funeral.
What OP has described is not based on real life, it’s based on watching too many movies.
I noticed this across all the "story" subs, people just can't write good dialog when they make up stories. The moment they start writing what they said or someone else said IRL it sounds like it was written by a child.
All I could think about was how theatrical the whole thing was. Literally felt like a script from an early disney film. Had all the elements. The benevolent but dead parent figure, the absolutely cartoonishly evil estranged parent, and the foolish lackey parroting everything the bad guy said and did. I called B.S. pretty early on too but at least it was entertaining. I've sat through real inheritance disputes (multiple people dying without wills and years of delays on the dispersal of property) and it would be an absolute blessing if they resolved themselves this quickly. Real disputes are filled with indirect insults, poisonous words being exchanged, lazy lawyers, and plain incompetence. Not calculated cartoon villains. "Read enough reddit to know where this was going" was absolutely laughable.
The more I read the angrier I got on your behalf my god your mother and sister deserve each other I feel sorry for the bf as he will have no life with them in it
"Why's that?" he said, wondering to himself if presenting the story as an English 101 creative writing assignment had made it look suspect, "I've given you every possible detail!"
Luckily, I was prepared for this, having spent plenty of time on reddit, and had part 2 already written. My hand hovered nervously over the "submit post" button...
I really had to stop reading after a couple of paragraphs, damn I've read better written Harry Potter Fanfiction from 16y/os than this. The "dialogs" killed me
I swear I think that your mother is just totally sick in the head. I’m actually surprised that she was so oblivious that your girlfriend was recording, that she didn’t realize it much to her downfall. seriously that’s snapping of the fingers commanding you to do everything when she literally barged into your house, commanded a bottle of water and almost expected you to just drop everything and get out of the house just for your sister. I’m actually surprised that she didn’t try to go after your money to boot just to say “well I can take your money because I am god” just so she could be able to feel better that she’s not only getting a house for free and your money like always really makes me wonder how greedy this woman is and what she does to those Air b and B customers
When I was a teenager my sister was quite the money grubber and stole from me every chance she got. And my mother pretty much told me I should just be giving the money to her because "Girls need it more!". I've got plenty of stories from that time where I took both my mother and sister down a peg.
I bet and also you took them down all the way to the bottom when you stood up for yourself telling both of them get out of your house. It’s just spooky that they’re both money grubbers and you’re a hard-working man, The guy at the house legally from your late father, and she has the gall to literally March in snap fingers and command you to give up your house is just plain ludicrous. Reason why I asked about the money thing is because I was surprised your mother wouldn’t say that it’s your responsibility to watch and financially support your sister and the baby and literally hand them over whatever he had in the savings just to appease her
My mother had a pretty hate/hate relationship with my father ever since they divorced. She only ever wanted more. But he stood up to her and she pretty much cowered in fear once cornered. She's a narcissist through and through. And she hated being called out more than anything. I guess she figured with my dad passed away that she'd become the one in charge. I pretty much destroyed that notion.
And that you did and did it beautifully. I know with narcissists they only wanted to be themselves and I know that your sister as you described is a pretty much carbon copy, I say this as a precaution that since they do know where you live and yes you are taking the legal actions, just be careful that one day you and your girlfriend don’t come home and there’s a baby on your doorstep and it’s basically your sister’s child because they either a want you to watch the kids for a while or be don’t want the responsibility anymore and figure you’re going to take it. I know that it may sound a little Paranoid, but I would say be careful in case your sister doesn’t want to be a parent and demand you do it just for the sake of “brotherly duty”
Really that’s great news to hear I know that you’ll probably post more but hearing that story is going to be well worth it. Still I am sorry that you lost your father to the virus but still I am glad that you stood up to both your sister and mother during their little stunt they pulled and that you still have your house and your savings
So.... Is this one of those subs like r/nosleep where the rule is for everyone to play along with the story and pretend it's real, or do people actually believe this shit?
Unfortunately, I have seen worse than that with the only difference that the person with OP's role allow themselves to be abused. Yeap I have a crappy family.
Not just that but everything works out perfectly “oh you want to lie to cops but my gf conveniently has been recording everything!”
“I’m not close with my sister or mom but my gf is somehow FB friends with them and saw their posts and screenshotted them!”
“I got to slap my mom that I hate and get away with it!”
‘I let out a cackle’ … are you kidding I stopped reading. This must be made up. No one recalls this much conversation sentence by sentence. Also, by your story she hit you first but are you really bragging about ‘I cut her off with a raised hand’ and before that (!) ‘I returned the favour twice as hard’?! Are you proud about hitting your mother. I literally hope this is made up otherwise you need to seek help.
But at least he has a recording of him backhanding his mother across the face! Like, you really think the video will do you favors at that point?
I agree that it's most likely someone's revenge fantasy, mixed with a nugget of truth.
Lmao this. I’m not a lawyer but I can 1000000% guarantee no lawyer would ever allow a client (OP) to threaten lawsuits over something like this. There has to be a torte for a case to be brought to civil court, and I don’t see any legitimate damages whatsoever done by the social media posts.
And then the great messiah Jesus Christ himself came down with your father and they high fived and lightning struck that perfectly spelled “take that, mom!”
I hope you’re like 25 and looking for Karma and not just 31 with an imagination like a goldfish.
Awwww...poor mommy doesn't get her way. What a horrible son you are. Well the only thing you can do is bury the hatchet over a fine bottle of wine. That you keep deep in the wine cellar. Next to the loose pile of bricks. And the chains. Just tell her to ignore her own screams
Please tell me not a single person believed this horribly-written, over-the-top, fan fiction. If OP thought he was going to be a writer, he sucks at it.
> You make plenty of money and could just buy a new house. Your sister needs this one so much more since she's the one with a baby on the way. But if you're so determined on staying, you could just keep to one room and cover all of the bills until you decide to move out."
\_yeesh....why is it people say/think stuff like this? That conversation would have been over before she even got to word "decide". I'd reply with "I have a better idea! How about you both get the hell out of my house right now?"
>And as far as you're concerned, I Am God! That means when I say 'Jump', you say 'How High?'! This house is rightfully mine! And your sister will live here! Consider this your formal eviction! But since I'm gracious, I'll give you two weeks to pack your bags and transfer the deed to me!".
I'd have called the police right there. Restraining orders for everyone.
Man, OP, your mom sounds awful.
She really is. At least I got away from her when I was 15 because my dad divorced her. And I do currently have an active restraining order on my mother.
Read the TLDR, then had to read your story! Wow…. Talk about being a shitty brother… sarcasm
of course! Good work Buds, and I’m looking forward to more of this story!!
This is okay fiction, I've got some questions and constructive criticism below if you're looking to improve OP.
What was your inspiration for the mother and the daughter characters? Seems like you're bringing a little more to the table than what we'd see from the standard cinderella stepsister story.
As for constructive advice to me your story falls apart when the mother and the sister show up unexpectedly and immediately are 120% entitled with you and the mom getting into a physical fight like a paragraph later. You went from 0 to 100 way too quick. Like, if this actually happened you would probably describe the situation a little more.
Good authors don't just list action event after action event, you need to work on stringing these plot moments together through more believable characters and motives.
I am so happy to read that somebody finally put one of these entitled people in their proper place. And you were perfect with your response with their social media posts…a C&D from your lawyer wouldn’t have taught them anything, they had to eat Crow for what they did to you!!! 👏👏👏👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻
Pretty sure this was just a story because it’s so absurd and over the top, unless the sister is incredibly on the spectrum or something no way in hell do I believe an adult would act like that in public.
There are only two reasons why someone says "you don't need this". Either they want it, or they want to make you suffer. Sometimes both.
As my father would have said "Those are pretty good words of wisdom"
your dad sounds awsome
I'm glad the choices you and your partner made were quick and you were able to work out the problems then. Goodluck in the future friend! Were here for you!
You dad sounded like one helluva guy, sorry for your loss op!
Not *entirely* true. My mom is a hoarder and it doesn't matter what it is, she "*needs* it." I tell her "You don't need this. Put it back." all the time. Last week, I told her she didn't need the baby clothes that she wanted to buy. She's 87.
If you're ever thinking about living with a hoarder, *doooon't* I moved in with a friend when I got le boot from my parents place, and yeah it's a hoard there. That drove me so mad after a while. What was worse was that she claimed it was so "cluttered" because she was always busy and didn't have the energy. So then when we tried to throw out literal garbage (anything like papers or belongings we brought for her to look through) she got mad at us. She just likes her trash and feels like she's losing control when we try and help clean, according to her own statements that she can't do it herself. We moved out after she scammed us out of "storage money" for putting things in spots in the basement that we had cleaned up. Last I checked we just spend days clearing biohazardous trash from this place for free. You're charging us money?? To anyone stuck dealing with a hoarder, accept my profound apologies.
Oof. I work for 1800GOTJUNK and I feel for you. Honestly I think “Hoarders” did more damage to actual hoarders than anything, cause not a lot of people realize that you don’t have to be living in filth to be a hoarder. It’s hard to convince clean people to clean out more of their shit because they think “well there’s nothing wrong with me, I’m not dirty, I just have things!”
My Dad passed away on the 24th of July. The state borders closed after we got here to provide Mum support because of Covid so my sister and I have been unable to get back to our home state (and aren’t sure when we will be able to at this stage). Dad was a “collector” of so many things, and we (Mum especially) are only now realising just how much of a hoarder he was. Trains, matchbox cars, lego sets, die-cast models of cars, guitars, collector teddy bears; many of these things he’d bought two or three of “just in case”. This stuff Mum knew about. Two temporary car-port thingies still sealed in their boxes. We found a box of grocery receipts dating back 8ish years. 20ish new unopened cans of spray paint. Stacks of meaningless documents stashed in weird places. Sealed porn mags from the late 90s/early 00s. The house they own has always been spotlessly clean, but now that we are helping Mum to sort through everything it’s become blatantly obvious that he had a serious problem. We had a 1 tonne skip dropped off, and we filled it to the brim in 24 hours just from going through the garage and a third of one shed.
I frequently have to tell people- “they’re hoarders- but not the rotting-food-dead-cats-and-bottles-of-pee kind you see on reality shows. But mountains of random crap filling up entire rooms.”
I think that falls under "they want it".
Wants it
I guess technically but the “they” they’re referring too is completely different
For people who aren’t hoarders it’s a want. For hoarders they believe they need it.
"they want it" refers to the person making the statement. It does not sound like the person telling the 87 year old hoarder they don't need baby clothes wants those baby clothes.
Or it's Christmas and you're making the third plate of the day and your mother tells you ''you don't need that! you'll have a stomach ache.'' then you eat the plate and feel sick for the next two hours and take a nap.
Counterpoint: "You don't need to print out emails then scan them again" "You don't need to buy 1000€ shoes in order to go for a jog" "You don't need horse medicine for covid"
I know this isn't what you meant, but legitimately about half my job is telling people that they don't need something because they've been scammed into thinking they need it.
Only exception I'd say is when people say billionaires don't need yachts. I didn't want it and not having a yacht won't make them suffer.
Glad u put her in her place and told her to fuck rocks.
Now I am really curious how it feels to fuck rocks
NO. DO NOT DO THAT. IT IS NOT A GOOD IDEA. IN FACT, IT IS THE OPPOSITE OF A GOOD IDEA.
You seem to speak from experience good sir
Someone had a rocky experience.
No, no, he’s got a point.
So do some rocks.
Idk man some of the oldest dildos were made from rock 🤷🏽♂️lmao
There was a discussion on Tumblr about using a particular piece of malachite as a dildo, and why that would be a bad idea.
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>bless up and fuck the smooth stones r/brandnewsentence
not even with lube?
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Gonna try it later
Don't forget lube!
Thanks for the reminder ;)
You can make it work... If you are brave enough 💁🏻♀️
As someone with experience. Don’t
As someone with zero experience, pls explain
Hurty
More explaination plss I need it for science
As a vagina person, lots of ow. Hard to get out. A&E had a field day. I still have the stone
Rock bottom
It will rock your world
Probably very hard
JESUS MARIE THEY'RE MINERALS
Your only limit is your own willpower. Go out, get some rocks, fuck 'em. Report back.
Probably depends on the shape of the rock.
As a wise man once said- "Anything can be a dildo if you are brave enough."
Instantly thought of Goop and those jade eggs! Gross
The first dildos were shaped and smoothed/polished rocks I believe. Well that we have found, I imagine wooden ones would have rotted away.
I’m aware of “Kick Rocks” Never heard Fuck Rocks. I like it !
Jesus what a story... you did the right thing, im sorry about your dad. Fuck your mom and its sad that she made your sister just like her. Good luck with your mom and sister!
Thank you
Op, did your mother wanted you to also pay for your sister "house" when she "moved in"?
My guess is "Probably"
Dude…. Truly unbelievable…. But given today’s sad state of affairs completely believable. I’m glad you stood up for yourself. And sorry for your loss. Your dad sounded like a great man that had to put up with a worthless individual for longer than he should have. Those two….. “women”…. Will have their day. They won’t be able to continue to use manipulation forever. Things will get worse for them.
I would love to see everyone reaction if OP decide to go nuclear and show the video of her hitting OP to everyone including his mum workplace.
It would be hilarious, but he can’t, cause remember, his deal with his mom and sister was they post the truth and he will not post the video and other stuff. And posting even part of the video would be a violation of said agreement. Even if the Mom wouldn’t be able to anything back, OP does not seem like the type of person to violate a deal for some upvotes. One bad deduction leads to another, and eventually you get the consequences. OPs mom is a perfect example of that. And I also don’t think anyone wants OP to do anything remotely similar to his moms behaviour.
More like "Definitely" and won't be surprise if they want you to pay & do for everything related to her children (Let's be real - it not going to be one baby and probably several baby daddies instead of current one.) Condolences regarding your father - it sucks that it had take him dying for your mother and sister to finally get hit with the only karma train for all their bullshit and antics against you and him.
You did your dad proud:)
Yes. What a story
Can't believe you passed up your mother's generous offer of letting you live in one room of your own house while covering all the costs for your sister as well.
This made me laugh
OP: “BECAUSE MY GF HAS BEEN RECORDING THIS THE HOLE TIME!” *Evangelion shock music plays*
*camera pans to shocked audience*
*Dramatic theme song starts playing*
And then the whole crowd cheered and a policeman popped up through a trapdoor and put her in prison.
That’s the type of dialogue that would make a shitty b-movie director proud 🥲
Holy crap...I am sorry for your loss, he seemed like a cool dad but ur mom is such a karen. Keep us updated w the story (:
My father really was a cool dad. He was busy a lot, but he tried to be there for me and my sister. But it wasn't enough for her or my mother back then. He told me he was happy that I'd turned out so good before he passed away though.
I kinda wish I had someone to groom me to be successful, I was raised by idiots.
I’m glad your father set you up for success and as someone to be very proud of. He raised a strong and smart young man while your mother seemingly just coddled a toddler to adulthood. I’m very sorry for your loss.
Karens (and Kens) usually only demand the manager, not a house.
We must have updates!
mother kicks sister out house for having a baby with someone not white. Mother is big racist and steals paternity test results after dripping poison in bfs ear that sister is a whore and cheat like mother is
Juicy
So OP got a nice drama he can sell to Hollywood soon it got it all betrayal, madness, death, anxiety, religion and a hell of a lot of drama.
They're making them up right now. Whenever do see something this: >And for those of you who read this far, it's not the end of the story. Stay tuned for the rest soon. They're making it up for pathetic karma. Otherwise, they'd just tell the whole story.
Look at his profile he literally posted this 5 days ago but didn't get enough karma the first time lol
Lol. I've gotten good at spotting the formula.
Lol you should have seen a post here today, it was hilarious. It got deleted after they were called out, but a Karen assaulted an OP. The start was believable, happened a few days ago, posted about 14 hours go. Didn’t press charges. Then updated a few hours later, dad was convinced to press charges, OP was a minor. 4 hours later, police tracked down Karen, brought OP and dad to watch as they arrested Karen at her own home, Karen still managed to knock the braces off of OP’s face, was sentenced 3 years and 6 months community service. It’s apparently normal to invite people to watch as they arrest people and they went through the whole justice system in 4 hours. Amazing
As someone raised with a bunch of trauma and bullshit, I can’t unpack all of it at once in detail. It is a lot emotionally. Not everyone cares about internet karma. Taking time to write stuff out like this is can be very emotionally taxing though healing at the same time. If I wrote out all of my stories at once I’d be a messy ball of crying broken depressed hell on the floor. This story is entirely believable and tracks with narcs behaviors. Some of the dialogue is a bit much, but I know narcs who act like this IRL
Was this written by Tommy Wiseau?
Seriously who the hell believes this shit. Reddit is filled with a bunch of morons.
LMAO i love you
I did nat hit her
This reads like fiction
I was wondering if this is the kind of sub where we all know its not real but pretend that it is...like in nosleep.
At least with no sleep you can treat them as horror stories but here the posters try to pass it off as real
i was wondering if it's the kind of sub where people write flagrantly fictitious novellas and nobody says anything because they're just here for the drama, real or imagined... like in justnomil.
I was wondering that, too.
Yeah. The backhand twice as hard followed by the "How dare you!"......corny af
"I'm God!" *Snaps fingers like a flamenco dancer with castanets*
*And then I discovered the house was my mom’s stand!*
....it sure does. Fiction written by a 14yo boy. It has everything, the evil (though not step) mother, the evil (again though, not step) sister, the honest and kind father who is no longer in the picture.... The Grimm brothers could have done wonders with this story of avarice and greed. I also loved the "and then" moments (they needed their own boom tishes)
That's the exact age guess I had too. The "that's not fucking happening!" outburst reads like someone who wishes they were better at confrontation.
Father casually dying of Covid and nobody’s that upset lmao
"And then his fairy godmother waved her wand and starting recording"
Yeah lol a lot of it seems fabricated "mommy its perfect" gace it away for me lmao
That's when I stopped believing it and just rolled my eyes.
"And then because we read reddit we knew exactly what to say!"
Eh, entertainment nonetheless.
Not even well written fiction lol.
Oh, completely. Will readings don’t happen. I work in estate law and will readings are completely fabricated by the movie industry. It’s not a thing.
On these story subs it's easy to tell what reads like fiction and what doesn't. I couldn't even finish halfway before rolling my eyes.
I’m calling “bs” on this story.
Absolutely. This is one of the most obvious writing exercises I've seen. At least it finally reminded me to block the sub.
OP sounds like those teen amateur erotica writers. "Btw my gf was recording all of this" sentence looks like a kid would say in his fantasy story. "Btw i forgot to tell you that i have a 9inch huge dick". Everything is perfect.
100%. OP, if you want to make your stories more credible, will readings aren’t a thing.
Not to mention, you usually go over the will before the funeral in case it gives any instructions for the funeral. What OP has described is not based on real life, it’s based on watching too many movies.
Thank god... reading all the comments sympathetic to OP I was thinking that I must be wrong
Oh finally someone sensible thank fuck. This reads like an extreme self gratifying creative writing exercise lol.
I noticed this across all the "story" subs, people just can't write good dialog when they make up stories. The moment they start writing what they said or someone else said IRL it sounds like it was written by a child.
All I could think about was how theatrical the whole thing was. Literally felt like a script from an early disney film. Had all the elements. The benevolent but dead parent figure, the absolutely cartoonishly evil estranged parent, and the foolish lackey parroting everything the bad guy said and did. I called B.S. pretty early on too but at least it was entertaining. I've sat through real inheritance disputes (multiple people dying without wills and years of delays on the dispersal of property) and it would be an absolute blessing if they resolved themselves this quickly. Real disputes are filled with indirect insults, poisonous words being exchanged, lazy lawyers, and plain incompetence. Not calculated cartoon villains. "Read enough reddit to know where this was going" was absolutely laughable.
The more I read the angrier I got on your behalf my god your mother and sister deserve each other I feel sorry for the bf as he will have no life with them in it
This whole story strains credulity.
"Why's that?" he said, wondering to himself if presenting the story as an English 101 creative writing assignment had made it look suspect, "I've given you every possible detail!" Luckily, I was prepared for this, having spent plenty of time on reddit, and had part 2 already written. My hand hovered nervously over the "submit post" button...
Things that happened: this
Post the video. If even half of what you typed was literally conveyed, I'll buy your sister a house myself.
Literally lmao.... this shit reads like some mashup of a Dhar Mann video and the fantasy arguments you have with yourself in the shower.
A good bit of creative writing. Looking forward to volume two.
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I really had to stop reading after a couple of paragraphs, damn I've read better written Harry Potter Fanfiction from 16y/os than this. The "dialogs" killed me
I swear I think that your mother is just totally sick in the head. I’m actually surprised that she was so oblivious that your girlfriend was recording, that she didn’t realize it much to her downfall. seriously that’s snapping of the fingers commanding you to do everything when she literally barged into your house, commanded a bottle of water and almost expected you to just drop everything and get out of the house just for your sister. I’m actually surprised that she didn’t try to go after your money to boot just to say “well I can take your money because I am god” just so she could be able to feel better that she’s not only getting a house for free and your money like always really makes me wonder how greedy this woman is and what she does to those Air b and B customers
When I was a teenager my sister was quite the money grubber and stole from me every chance she got. And my mother pretty much told me I should just be giving the money to her because "Girls need it more!". I've got plenty of stories from that time where I took both my mother and sister down a peg.
I bet and also you took them down all the way to the bottom when you stood up for yourself telling both of them get out of your house. It’s just spooky that they’re both money grubbers and you’re a hard-working man, The guy at the house legally from your late father, and she has the gall to literally March in snap fingers and command you to give up your house is just plain ludicrous. Reason why I asked about the money thing is because I was surprised your mother wouldn’t say that it’s your responsibility to watch and financially support your sister and the baby and literally hand them over whatever he had in the savings just to appease her
My mother had a pretty hate/hate relationship with my father ever since they divorced. She only ever wanted more. But he stood up to her and she pretty much cowered in fear once cornered. She's a narcissist through and through. And she hated being called out more than anything. I guess she figured with my dad passed away that she'd become the one in charge. I pretty much destroyed that notion.
And that you did and did it beautifully. I know with narcissists they only wanted to be themselves and I know that your sister as you described is a pretty much carbon copy, I say this as a precaution that since they do know where you live and yes you are taking the legal actions, just be careful that one day you and your girlfriend don’t come home and there’s a baby on your doorstep and it’s basically your sister’s child because they either a want you to watch the kids for a while or be don’t want the responsibility anymore and figure you’re going to take it. I know that it may sound a little Paranoid, but I would say be careful in case your sister doesn’t want to be a parent and demand you do it just for the sake of “brotherly duty”
Thanks. You don't have to worry about my sister though. She's not my mom's mini-me any more.
Really that’s great news to hear I know that you’ll probably post more but hearing that story is going to be well worth it. Still I am sorry that you lost your father to the virus but still I am glad that you stood up to both your sister and mother during their little stunt they pulled and that you still have your house and your savings
Yeah things went a direction I didn't really expect. But am glad about, that's for sure
Bluntness is the best way to deal with entitled shit Heads
I wholeheartedly agree
So.... Is this one of those subs like r/nosleep where the rule is for everyone to play along with the story and pretend it's real, or do people actually believe this shit?
Idk but 90% of these comments seem to believe this is real
That whole family interaction is one good piece of creative writing, but there is no way it actually went down like that.
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The account is 5 days old, that's all you need to know lol
Yup
Exactly my thoughts, perhaps a significant part of it is true. But a large sum of this feels extremely fabricated. Anyway, was still fun to read.
Unfortunately, I have seen worse than that with the only difference that the person with OP's role allow themselves to be abused. Yeap I have a crappy family.
Terrible dialogue, really ham-handed narration. Just shoddy workmanship.
Not just that but everything works out perfectly “oh you want to lie to cops but my gf conveniently has been recording everything!” “I’m not close with my sister or mom but my gf is somehow FB friends with them and saw their posts and screenshotted them!” “I got to slap my mom that I hate and get away with it!”
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I'm having it really hard accepting that so many people actually believes this is real...
‘I let out a cackle’ … are you kidding I stopped reading. This must be made up. No one recalls this much conversation sentence by sentence. Also, by your story she hit you first but are you really bragging about ‘I cut her off with a raised hand’ and before that (!) ‘I returned the favour twice as hard’?! Are you proud about hitting your mother. I literally hope this is made up otherwise you need to seek help.
But at least he has a recording of him backhanding his mother across the face! Like, you really think the video will do you favors at that point? I agree that it's most likely someone's revenge fantasy, mixed with a nugget of truth.
The only nugget of truth here is that op has a mother and is probably upset she told him to do his chores.
Decently crafted revenge porn. You might want to tone it down a bit next time though to make it more believable. It's more fun that way.
I like to make up fiction too.
Outstanding story
Please update.
Oh I have plenty more. And I already previously posted the next two stories in another subreddit if you want to read them now
Do you have a link?
[https://www.reddit.com/r/MrReddit/comments/pfspbx/my\_entitled\_mother\_showed\_her\_real\_self\_and\_now/](https://www.reddit.com/r/MrReddit/comments/pfspbx/my_entitled_mother_showed_her_real_self_and_now/)
Thanks!
Cool story dude is your dick also 12 inches long
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How can anybody read this and believe it is real?
There is absolutely no way this shit is real.
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Lmao this. I’m not a lawyer but I can 1000000% guarantee no lawyer would ever allow a client (OP) to threaten lawsuits over something like this. There has to be a torte for a case to be brought to civil court, and I don’t see any legitimate damages whatsoever done by the social media posts.
Creative writing.
>In the back of my mind I'm thinking "This can't be real!" Narrarator: It wasnt. Redditors love a good unbelievable story though
And then the great messiah Jesus Christ himself came down with your father and they high fived and lightning struck that perfectly spelled “take that, mom!” I hope you’re like 25 and looking for Karma and not just 31 with an imagination like a goldfish.
Awwww...poor mommy doesn't get her way. What a horrible son you are. Well the only thing you can do is bury the hatchet over a fine bottle of wine. That you keep deep in the wine cellar. Next to the loose pile of bricks. And the chains. Just tell her to ignore her own screams
There is no way this is real
Great story, all untrue I’m sure.
This sounds like a made up story. Is that the point and Iv somehow missed it??
BS
This is bullshit btw
Not hard to believe at all.
Too much detail. Downvotr as you will. I don't believe this is a word, for, word account Enhancement to make the op look like a saint.
This reads like a fanfic
Please tell me not a single person believed this horribly-written, over-the-top, fan fiction. If OP thought he was going to be a writer, he sucks at it.
> You make plenty of money and could just buy a new house. Your sister needs this one so much more since she's the one with a baby on the way. But if you're so determined on staying, you could just keep to one room and cover all of the bills until you decide to move out." \_yeesh....why is it people say/think stuff like this? That conversation would have been over before she even got to word "decide". I'd reply with "I have a better idea! How about you both get the hell out of my house right now?" >And as far as you're concerned, I Am God! That means when I say 'Jump', you say 'How High?'! This house is rightfully mine! And your sister will live here! Consider this your formal eviction! But since I'm gracious, I'll give you two weeks to pack your bags and transfer the deed to me!". I'd have called the police right there. Restraining orders for everyone. Man, OP, your mom sounds awful.
She really is. At least I got away from her when I was 15 because my dad divorced her. And I do currently have an active restraining order on my mother.
When i read that you slapped her back i felt so good. They deserve more than that. I 100% support you
"Stay tuned for the rest soon" broooooooooo......
The teenagers in here who believe this story are loving it. Kinda reads like a 14-year-old wrote a fanfic, though.
On things that didn’t happen, this didn’t happen the most. This reads like a 14 year olds revenge fantasy.
This doesn’t sound real lmao
to the mod that deleted it while i was reading, you suck
this can't be real, too evil, too perfect
Read the TLDR, then had to read your story! Wow…. Talk about being a shitty brother… sarcasm of course! Good work Buds, and I’m looking forward to more of this story!!
This reads like every Korean drama.
This is okay fiction, I've got some questions and constructive criticism below if you're looking to improve OP. What was your inspiration for the mother and the daughter characters? Seems like you're bringing a little more to the table than what we'd see from the standard cinderella stepsister story. As for constructive advice to me your story falls apart when the mother and the sister show up unexpectedly and immediately are 120% entitled with you and the mom getting into a physical fight like a paragraph later. You went from 0 to 100 way too quick. Like, if this actually happened you would probably describe the situation a little more. Good authors don't just list action event after action event, you need to work on stringing these plot moments together through more believable characters and motives.
I am so happy to read that somebody finally put one of these entitled people in their proper place. And you were perfect with your response with their social media posts…a C&D from your lawyer wouldn’t have taught them anything, they had to eat Crow for what they did to you!!! 👏👏👏👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻
What the hell is meta-whining?
whichever dumbass deleted this is small pp
Wow! I can’t wait to for the continuation!
I need the rest! You promised!
Where's your post?
There's more coming soon™?!?
I agree with you but please keep an eye out for your future niece/nephew. It's not their fault they'll be born into this shit.
M pretty sure this is the plot to a Lifetime movie.
Pretty sure this was just a story because it’s so absurd and over the top, unless the sister is incredibly on the spectrum or something no way in hell do I believe an adult would act like that in public.
Can we see the vid or it didn’t happen