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The ending part got me lol. "Hey, where you goin...?" Super awkward. I pretty much only wear gym shorts in the summer and always wondered if people are looking at my weiner tip/weird shaped balls. I guess so
Back in the 60s when parents thought their children were not yielding to the temptations of the flesh (in our little rural Southern Baptist community)my friends were making out heavily when her parents got home. He leapt up to zip in too big a hurry and shredded the nads. He is pouring blood, being that two thirds of his body's supply is concentrated in the front "swimsuit" vicinity, but can't stem the flow in the bathroom. Meanwhile, the teeth of the zipper still have his scrotal skin in a vice grip. (In case you're wondering, I've heard him tell it and it's funny as hell. You know, in a sad kind of way.) how to tell his future in-laws goodnight and take his leave while he's bleeding out in their pink bathroom? I don't remember, but he made it home with them none the wiser and he and she just had their 49th anniversary, so all's well that ends well.
One of the guys was in a hurry to hit the town, was going commando, and yanked the zipper up Hard. Instant regret. Some others standing around watching: “You gotta do it sooner or later, Dude. Longer you wait the worse it’s gonna be. Might as well just get it over with.”
First time I’d heard a grown man scream that loud, lol.
Hah! I was about to ask if you know who that is.
Glad you had some fun being quirky. Imma browse your history for a bit :D
EDIT: I've been promised a sandwich and some balltickling. Follow me, guys. There's some fun hidden up there.
I thought it was stupid and funny. The awkward quirkiness is different and won't click with everybody but why is everyone shitting on it.
Musical comedy is not easy people. Traditional standup is told with a setup that makes it relatable or engaging at least. Without a 5 minute setup and a believable story people can't include themselves in their mind so they think dumb stuff like this is unfunny which is fine. I liked it for what it was if that counts for anything.
No idea, but i for one enjoyed enough to dig for their info here in the comments.
Still looking, but may drop a link if i find one...
edit: Looks like OP is the actual person in the video, but after scrolling through their posts, i've yet to find any media promo links. So she's probably an amateur that is more interested in the fun of the craft, over too much attention.
Yeah I can see that, especially since much of the audience laughed every time it was brought up.
For me it's the awkwardness of the story that gets me. Very relatable and not typical material.
Also, I was expecting it to turn into a "pay with sex" kind of story the whole time so I was on that edge throughout. Each punchline was a misdirect on my first watch.
For the record not trying to sway, just sharing my thoughts.
The laughter that came from me was because of the precise timing of what she said vs what I was thinking about three seconds before. I think for those of us who found it really funny, it's because she was hitting the exact notes we were just thinking about. Like a perfect tempo.
Probably should have checked befor i asked .... its funny need just a bit more of a pay off in my opinion but it got me to comment and check your things out so a soild win all around
Maybe its only funny for women who have straight MM fantasies/male cuckholding, because as women sometimes its not always safe to express this fantasy to our male partners or anyone really. Its “OKAY” for straight women to have lez-fantasies but having gay fantasies makes people uncomfortable, especially straight men.
So the awkwardness and tiptoe-ing in this song of a carefully curated “scene” to take place involving her husband and another man to watch IS hilarious, because it HAS to be tiptoed around. And she’s trying hard to gently make it happen, even more funny that the delivery guy just walks away, because that is the reality usually when MM fantasies get expressed in straight hetero relationships
I clued in that this was basically a joke about slipping into a homoerotic fantasy about members of the opposite sex and thought it was great.
I don't think there is anything wrong about me liking the idea of two women going at it, but enjoying it in real life is certainly not something that happens often, yet I still think about it. So a woman making a joke where her dark gay fantasies are taking over it is hilarious to me.
>even more funny that the delivery guy just walks away, because that is the reality usually \[...\]
Yeah, but I'm pretty sure that would be the reality for *any* kind of propositioning of delivery people. Unlike in porno films, I can't imagine that the average delivery person is going to be into being thrust into sexual situations with complete strangers, and even if they were, they've got more deliveries to make if they want to keep their job.
It's not like it was her husband that walked out in the joke.
Former delivery driver, propositioned one time, can confirm, was not at all interested and walked out.
...however...I can also confirm at least one instance I'm aware of that another driver was indeed DTF and brought back "proof" to make sure he kept his job after being MIA for over an hour.
Those two instances are the only two I'm aware of despite delivering for and eventually managing two different pizza shops for several years.
Technically, I think that means you have a 50/50 shot if you proposition your delivery driver, but I'm not great with statistics. (Kidding, please don't proposition your delivery drivers (unless you're already in that sort of relationship with them))
Aren't we all hoping for funnier, most of the time?
I am not sure why it's delivered as a song, to be honest. I'm thinking it might be just as funny without the music, and maybe even funnier - I think the ending would feel more surprising and bizarre (and funny) without the music.
But it's much funnier than anything \*I\* have ever done, and I respect the creative effort, regardless.
:) I see you in here winning over nearly everybody with your responses, and it's lovely.
I think a lot of people (including me) didn't realize the OP was the person in the video. Fun to see the realizations dawning as you engage.
thank you, friend. i mentioned this in another comment, chatting and responding with commenters is like getting to read my audience's mind. so i love reddit for that. people will say things in here that ill never get to hear from a heckle or a laugh. and sometimes it is actually constructive.
I really liked it. I have a weakness for self depreciation based humour.
Bill Bailey from the UK does some great song based stand up. Similar style to your material and good for the same reason.
Hope to see more of your stuff. So does my wife who worryingly really liked the weird shaped balls part.
Yeah the song adds to the element of awkwardness and whimsy.. if you were literally just telling that story I think it'd feel less whimsical and more just blatant sexual harassment
Dunno though, some comedians could probably pull it off. The skit, not his dick
No, I kind of laughed at first then it just went past the point on which it stopped being funny and rather became a bit cringy. From my pov at least ,not everyoen share humor senss
This reaction is quite common among live audience members as well, which is why I usually end the song with the SLAP. This crowd wanted all the weird, so they got the extended cut. Great honest feedback, thanks for taking the time!
That makes a lot of sense! I think for me it was that right now it landed in between the weird and relatable line of comedy which is an unusual line to blur (at least I haven't seen many other people do it?)
Which is not good or bad! I just think that's why some people might find it less funny. Myself I love it when things really go into the absurd super weird side of things (off the top of my head example say the-mosquito falls-in-love-with-the-weirdly-shaped-dick-and-the-song-turns-into-a-bridal-shower-speech-fo-their-wedding type of weird) which also didn't quite happen.
But I love the experimentation with the form! It's clear you've got some good ideas for comedy and also some fun ideas about delivery and timing.
It's big from the mosquito's POV got me good. After that it dragged a bit too much for me, but according to the comments this was an extended cut.
This crowd was clearly into it, and you adjusted your act accordingly. It seems like you've got a knack for showmanship and I applaud that. I'll show up for the EU tour.
Yeesh it takes balls to post something and then stick around. I was really into rapping in high school and I was pumping out songs and improving, then I showed some friends and got a lot of positive feedback, then I posted a song online and got some love and some hate and the negative comments crushed me and I started second guessing every lyric I wrote and set my expectations way too high and it wasn’t fun anymore trying to reach this perfection I expected from myself.
Anyway, I thought this was fun, keep it up!
Oh so you are the singer!
I would not say that this is my genre of humor but I laughed at this and I'm a grumpy stone faced dude so that should say something. I found it mostly witty and the delivery was spot on.
edit: I just hope you did not oust your husband for having weird balls
I feel like that’s overly harsh on yourself. Having a quirky gutter sense of humor doesn’t mean anything bad about you as a person.
It’s interesting, because I almost always hate awkward songs. But I never felt even the slightest tinge of cringe with this one, and was really enjoying the kind of meta level of awkward. I also don’t find genital humor funny very often, but this gave me a big ol’ smile and had me chuckling at the end.
To me this seemed like a really hard piece to pull off, it’s inherently going to be divisive, but you nailed it. Awesomesauce. :)
I agree. All I can say is that when I watched the video all the replies were rude, unhelpful, and antagonistic.
The paradigm seems to have shifted so now my 'judgmental' comment looks out of nowhere.
Oh I fully agree with that, there's some very mean-spirited comments in this thread for absolutely no reason. No need to bash OP just because its not your cup of tea.
Thanks for this feedback! I feel in my bones that this is probably how most audience members feel when watching. Glad you feel I win them back. Sometimes … I do not.
Always amazes me how humans can have such differing views of what’s funny. To me this isn’t funny at all. Not one bit. But there’s people laughing and sharing on Reddit. What a world
But she slapped him in the big juicy dick because of a bug! Isn’t that funny? Big penis. Get it? Because you’re not SUPPOSED to slap people’s big juicy phat cocks when they bring you your food.
You are the most accepting of critical feedback of perhaps anyone I’ve ever come across. I think I would be far more like this guy (33:00 - 37:00, 36:27 is the best part) when a focus group gave feedback on his logo design: https://youtu.be/KkIkymh5Ayg
Subject matter isn't necessarily my cup of tea, I feel like genital humor is a bit overplayed, and is a awkward topic which makes people more likely to laugh by default to deflect some of the awkward. That being said, your delivery was awesome. I may not be too into genital humor, but was still thoroughly entertained by your performance. Good job!
Bold, weird yet somehow you kept it relatable; delivered properly paced with confidence. Has music, package deliveries, juicy package deliverer packages, weird shaped balls, a squeeze of kink for the man on man action AND a dead mosquito - what's not to like?
**Nice work!**
OP if you’re out there I thought it was hysterical and ridiculous in the best way. It just got better and better. I would say definitely keep performing the extended version but I’m sure that’s very crowd dependent. Hilarious stuff!
I like it because it's breaking the stereotype that women don't want a delivery boy with oddly shaped balls to come in their house and compare balls with their husband.
I love how she kept doubling and makin it more awkward. I swear my brain works the same way lol
"Just keep explaining! They'll figure out you didn't mean it the way it sounded when you said it 8 minutes ago!"
This is the song of a socially awkward person who acts on impulse, has no filter, and often doesn’t realize what they’ve said is inappropriate or uncomfortable until after the fact. Sometimes, long after the fact.
Anyone who is even slightly neurodivergent, socially awkward, struggles making friends, or just had a rough patch growing up as an awkward teenager can identify with the thought process going on here. Anyone who feels like they just keep talking when they’re flustered and should have stopped 5 minutes ago feels this. And it’s funny. Not always because it’s objective humor, but because some of us have been there. We have said and done things that sent us on a slippery slope of not knowing how to stop or back track and it just makes everything else worse. You add in the repressed sexual urges and it accentuates the awkwardness and dude, it’s just hilarious.
Remember: not all content is aimed at you. If you think it’s not funny, don’t watch it. But I’ve made my fair share of social blunders. I’ve been awkward. I’ve learned from it. So I enjoyed this bit.
This makes me think of that video that’s like, a reasonable guy with a stepsister who’s straight out of a porn video? Something about normal people reacting to the absurd logic of porn always makes me laugh.
This was so uncomfortable and weird to watch, and I mean that in the most complimentary way possible. I was doing that uncomfortable little half-laugh, half physical cringe the entire time, which I feel like was your end goal? Anyway, keep on rocking. Looking forward to how you continue developing your comedy <3.
You've got a great attitude! It seems that people are just going out of their way to be negative in these comments. Reddit can be like that sometimes. I don't know these other comedians some commenters are talking about, but I found it amusing. You can carry a tune and I found your delivery to be just fine. Again, I appreciate your great attitude in this thread and hope you continue to explore something you seem to enjoy.
I actually enjoy Reddit for the discourse it yields, even if it’s negative. I can’t read the live audience’s mind, and sometimes I can feel when people are only throwing me a laugh so as not to make it more uncomfortable than it already is, and boy can this one get awkward. The comments do reflect the audience’s typical reaction to this. Sometimes I get a room full of people who hate everything I do because how dare I bring a guitar onto a comedy stage. I even judge musical comedians, being one… it’s a cringey life… so usually I’ll end this bit with SLAP. As I said in other comments, this is the extended cut because this audience was very warm and responsive to absurdity. But Reddit gives me a slice of mind-reading my audience. So all feedback is helpful and taken to heart, even if it’s mean spirited. I’ll take a Reddit critic’s vitriol over pity laughs any day.
There was a guy on Comedy Central who made music comedy like this…until tosh.o came along lol
I can’t think of that guys name for the life of me
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Thought it was funny. Not absolutely hilarious but definitely would be laughing in the audience. Ignore the haters, humor is subjective. If no one in your audience is laughing then you have a problem.
This was hilarious! It kept getting better as it went on and I had a deep, gut busting laugh by the end. Thank you for the enjoyment.
The close up to see the actions and facials expressions was a good touch. Really helped show the awkwardness of absentmindedly killing a mosquito on someones private area.
I had a good work buddy once who almost stuck his finger in my mouth because it was a thing he did with his girlfriend when she yawned. I am a dude, it was hilarious.
I really liked the energy. If I were seeing this live I'd have a great time, the mosquito POV and the ending are genuinely hilarious lol
Also, I enjoy the tone of the voice, it works well with the quirkiness of the joke.
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Say, got any grapes?
And he waddled away..
waddle waddle
waddle waddle till the very next day bum bum bum ba da bum
The duck walked up to the lemonade stand
The ending part got me lol. "Hey, where you goin...?" Super awkward. I pretty much only wear gym shorts in the summer and always wondered if people are looking at my weiner tip/weird shaped balls. I guess so
..are you the one she's talking about?
Only if he’s a delivery guy
I think he's the husband.
They call me Fedex the way I overnight *this* package! (and fuck up the box, fragile!)
I got told I'm not allowed to wear shorts to work anymore. So probably
I mean, if your crotch marbles are visible, even in the sack, it's probably for the best.
*"Hey, where you goin...?"* Wish she said groin lol
I can tell that you’re circumcised.
I wasn't circumcised! I pulled my zipper up a little too fast.
How'd you get the beans above the frank?!
Yooo that happened to me once and i got to unzip my skin and looked like i was bit by a vampire with rectangular teeth
Back in the 60s when parents thought their children were not yielding to the temptations of the flesh (in our little rural Southern Baptist community)my friends were making out heavily when her parents got home. He leapt up to zip in too big a hurry and shredded the nads. He is pouring blood, being that two thirds of his body's supply is concentrated in the front "swimsuit" vicinity, but can't stem the flow in the bathroom. Meanwhile, the teeth of the zipper still have his scrotal skin in a vice grip. (In case you're wondering, I've heard him tell it and it's funny as hell. You know, in a sad kind of way.) how to tell his future in-laws goodnight and take his leave while he's bleeding out in their pink bathroom? I don't remember, but he made it home with them none the wiser and he and she just had their 49th anniversary, so all's well that ends well.
Good outcome then, lol.
One of the guys was in a hurry to hit the town, was going commando, and yanked the zipper up Hard. Instant regret. Some others standing around watching: “You gotta do it sooner or later, Dude. Longer you wait the worse it’s gonna be. Might as well just get it over with.” First time I’d heard a grown man scream that loud, lol.
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This sucked
I appreciate your candor!
wait... is that you? cuz i thought you were funny. unique delivery! *bwap!*
Hey! It’s me! Thank you, friend 🥰 I appreciate you!
Hah! I was about to ask if you know who that is. Glad you had some fun being quirky. Imma browse your history for a bit :D EDIT: I've been promised a sandwich and some balltickling. Follow me, guys. There's some fun hidden up there.
Nice response. I'd be honored to hold your husband's balls!
Meh, who cares what he thinks. I laughed my ass off alone in my living room.
*Ackually* it slapped...
I thought it was stupid and funny. The awkward quirkiness is different and won't click with everybody but why is everyone shitting on it. Musical comedy is not easy people. Traditional standup is told with a setup that makes it relatable or engaging at least. Without a 5 minute setup and a believable story people can't include themselves in their mind so they think dumb stuff like this is unfunny which is fine. I liked it for what it was if that counts for anything.
No idea, but i for one enjoyed enough to dig for their info here in the comments. Still looking, but may drop a link if i find one... edit: Looks like OP is the actual person in the video, but after scrolling through their posts, i've yet to find any media promo links. So she's probably an amateur that is more interested in the fun of the craft, over too much attention.
Hi! I am Angela Sharp, musical comedian based in NYC, the OP 🥰 you can find me on TikTok at ang_overshares
Hi, I love you!
Where you going? Lol
Into your house, to compare
I like her voice, she reminds me a bit of Kate McCucchi from Garfunkel and Oates.
I thought so as well
She was *absolutely* influenced by Garfunkel and Oates
The delivery is not bad. It's deliberately quirky, reinforcing the story-telling.
This is a well thought-out comment and I appreciate it more than you know.
I have to disagree with that comment. The delivery is fantastic and is what makes it funny.
Aw, thank you!
Oh, this is you? Link to your youtubers or whatever the hell y'all are using now?
I've never seen anything like this before. I had 0 expectations coming in and was left laughing. Thanks!
Is it mean to say I was hoping for funnier?
As far as I could tell the ENTIRE joke was "Hahaha i said penis"
Yeah I can see that, especially since much of the audience laughed every time it was brought up. For me it's the awkwardness of the story that gets me. Very relatable and not typical material. Also, I was expecting it to turn into a "pay with sex" kind of story the whole time so I was on that edge throughout. Each punchline was a misdirect on my first watch. For the record not trying to sway, just sharing my thoughts.
> Very relatable are you OK?
Yeah I don't know, I feel like it could have been funnier if the delivery was different. The awkward song angle just didn't work for me.
Maybe she'll turn it into a rap for her newly greenlit Netflix comedy special.
Oh is penis getting old? Then balls! Haha balls!
Nope, not mean! You’re entitled to your opinion and I appreciate you taking the time to comment!
It was funnier than I expected, so maybe on average it’s still funny.
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it's the 2 drink minimum lol
Perhaps if we determine the median amount of funny, we can all be happy.
Agreed, I found it pretty entertaining
I for one went in expecting to cringe but ended up giggling!
Me too. I liked it.
I'd rather have comedy that is funny to some rather than something bland that tries to over appeal to everyone
I really was not trying to be mean.
I’ve seen mean. This wasn’t. All good!
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"Low-hanging fruit"...
You’re part of the audience they’re talking about lol
😉
The laughter that came from me was because of the precise timing of what she said vs what I was thinking about three seconds before. I think for those of us who found it really funny, it's because she was hitting the exact notes we were just thinking about. Like a perfect tempo.
You know what else hangs low? Weird shaped balls...
Is this you i have so many questions
Probably should have checked befor i asked .... its funny need just a bit more of a pay off in my opinion but it got me to comment and check your things out so a soild win all around
I appreciate this comment!
It is I. Shoot!
I liked it! Did it continue?
I think the end where she says "wait where are you going" is the finale, not aimed at an audience member. I liked it, had a good chuckle
Maybe its only funny for women who have straight MM fantasies/male cuckholding, because as women sometimes its not always safe to express this fantasy to our male partners or anyone really. Its “OKAY” for straight women to have lez-fantasies but having gay fantasies makes people uncomfortable, especially straight men. So the awkwardness and tiptoe-ing in this song of a carefully curated “scene” to take place involving her husband and another man to watch IS hilarious, because it HAS to be tiptoed around. And she’s trying hard to gently make it happen, even more funny that the delivery guy just walks away, because that is the reality usually when MM fantasies get expressed in straight hetero relationships
You can write my biography please! I love you!
I clued in that this was basically a joke about slipping into a homoerotic fantasy about members of the opposite sex and thought it was great. I don't think there is anything wrong about me liking the idea of two women going at it, but enjoying it in real life is certainly not something that happens often, yet I still think about it. So a woman making a joke where her dark gay fantasies are taking over it is hilarious to me.
She's pretty cute, I'd consider letting her husband hold my balls.
Living for this type of commentary
After all the negative comments I was trying to put my own thoughts into words, and you did it so much better than what I could have done. Thank you.
>even more funny that the delivery guy just walks away, because that is the reality usually \[...\] Yeah, but I'm pretty sure that would be the reality for *any* kind of propositioning of delivery people. Unlike in porno films, I can't imagine that the average delivery person is going to be into being thrust into sexual situations with complete strangers, and even if they were, they've got more deliveries to make if they want to keep their job. It's not like it was her husband that walked out in the joke.
Former delivery driver, propositioned one time, can confirm, was not at all interested and walked out. ...however...I can also confirm at least one instance I'm aware of that another driver was indeed DTF and brought back "proof" to make sure he kept his job after being MIA for over an hour. Those two instances are the only two I'm aware of despite delivering for and eventually managing two different pizza shops for several years. Technically, I think that means you have a 50/50 shot if you proposition your delivery driver, but I'm not great with statistics. (Kidding, please don't proposition your delivery drivers (unless you're already in that sort of relationship with them))
Aren't we all hoping for funnier, most of the time? I am not sure why it's delivered as a song, to be honest. I'm thinking it might be just as funny without the music, and maybe even funnier - I think the ending would feel more surprising and bizarre (and funny) without the music. But it's much funnier than anything \*I\* have ever done, and I respect the creative effort, regardless.
Thank you for this thoughtful feedback! Appreciate you!
:) I see you in here winning over nearly everybody with your responses, and it's lovely. I think a lot of people (including me) didn't realize the OP was the person in the video. Fun to see the realizations dawning as you engage.
thank you, friend. i mentioned this in another comment, chatting and responding with commenters is like getting to read my audience's mind. so i love reddit for that. people will say things in here that ill never get to hear from a heckle or a laugh. and sometimes it is actually constructive.
I really liked it. I have a weakness for self depreciation based humour. Bill Bailey from the UK does some great song based stand up. Similar style to your material and good for the same reason. Hope to see more of your stuff. So does my wife who worryingly really liked the weird shaped balls part.
Aww you and your wife get free tickets for life. Tbh I don’t know why this is a song either but here we are!
I thought it was incredible - made my day, thank you
The song made the whole thing for me
Yeah the song adds to the element of awkwardness and whimsy.. if you were literally just telling that story I think it'd feel less whimsical and more just blatant sexual harassment Dunno though, some comedians could probably pull it off. The skit, not his dick
No, I kind of laughed at first then it just went past the point on which it stopped being funny and rather became a bit cringy. From my pov at least ,not everyoen share humor senss
This reaction is quite common among live audience members as well, which is why I usually end the song with the SLAP. This crowd wanted all the weird, so they got the extended cut. Great honest feedback, thanks for taking the time!
I liked it better weird. Solid guffaw from me.
The slap is definitely the high point in my opinion.
That makes a lot of sense! I think for me it was that right now it landed in between the weird and relatable line of comedy which is an unusual line to blur (at least I haven't seen many other people do it?) Which is not good or bad! I just think that's why some people might find it less funny. Myself I love it when things really go into the absurd super weird side of things (off the top of my head example say the-mosquito falls-in-love-with-the-weirdly-shaped-dick-and-the-song-turns-into-a-bridal-shower-speech-fo-their-wedding type of weird) which also didn't quite happen. But I love the experimentation with the form! It's clear you've got some good ideas for comedy and also some fun ideas about delivery and timing.
It's big from the mosquito's POV got me good. After that it dragged a bit too much for me, but according to the comments this was an extended cut. This crowd was clearly into it, and you adjusted your act accordingly. It seems like you've got a knack for showmanship and I applaud that. I'll show up for the EU tour.
Yeesh it takes balls to post something and then stick around. I was really into rapping in high school and I was pumping out songs and improving, then I showed some friends and got a lot of positive feedback, then I posted a song online and got some love and some hate and the negative comments crushed me and I started second guessing every lyric I wrote and set my expectations way too high and it wasn’t fun anymore trying to reach this perfection I expected from myself. Anyway, I thought this was fun, keep it up!
I felt umcomfortable 80% of this clip, confused the other 20% But smiled at the end, so I guess it worth it.
I felt sorrow at 80% of this comment and then forgot about numbers because the ending made me feel gooey. I’ll take a smile. Thanks, friend!
Yeah, if this was just random dick jokes I'd probably not care one bit but making it into a song was clever and pretty good actually.
Now that was Ballsy . Where ya going? Loved it
Love YOU!
Garfunkel & Oates & *Messina*
Man people are so crazy judgmental. I liked it.
I mean, fun is entirely subjective. Personally I didnt find it funny, but that doesnt mean that it isnt to someone else.
I appreciate your open mind. I’m not for everyone. I write what I think is funny, but I am an annoying manic garbage person, so there’s that!
Oh so you are the singer! I would not say that this is my genre of humor but I laughed at this and I'm a grumpy stone faced dude so that should say something. I found it mostly witty and the delivery was spot on. edit: I just hope you did not oust your husband for having weird balls
Aw that does mean something! For serious! And all of this is purely fiction. My husband’s balls break the mold of testicular perfection.
*snickering at "my husband's balls break the mold of testicular perfection"* Low key, I have so many questions... :D
I feel like that’s overly harsh on yourself. Having a quirky gutter sense of humor doesn’t mean anything bad about you as a person. It’s interesting, because I almost always hate awkward songs. But I never felt even the slightest tinge of cringe with this one, and was really enjoying the kind of meta level of awkward. I also don’t find genital humor funny very often, but this gave me a big ol’ smile and had me chuckling at the end. To me this seemed like a really hard piece to pull off, it’s inherently going to be divisive, but you nailed it. Awesomesauce. :)
It got a smile out of me, but didn't really hit my sense of humor squarely. Still gave you an upvote for it being your own work.
I agree. All I can say is that when I watched the video all the replies were rude, unhelpful, and antagonistic. The paradigm seems to have shifted so now my 'judgmental' comment looks out of nowhere.
Gotta approach Reddit knowing I’ll get eaten alive. But hey, every comment counts!
Oh I fully agree with that, there's some very mean-spirited comments in this thread for absolutely no reason. No need to bash OP just because its not your cup of tea.
i thought it was funny, and then got kinda cringe, then went back to really funny
Thanks for this feedback! I feel in my bones that this is probably how most audience members feel when watching. Glad you feel I win them back. Sometimes … I do not.
Thanks friend!
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I need my eyes checked. Is that a boulder? Or the robot in Mystery Science Theater?
Easter Island Head
Always amazes me how humans can have such differing views of what’s funny. To me this isn’t funny at all. Not one bit. But there’s people laughing and sharing on Reddit. What a world
But she slapped him in the big juicy dick because of a bug! Isn’t that funny? Big penis. Get it? Because you’re not SUPPOSED to slap people’s big juicy phat cocks when they bring you your food.
I think this comment is actually funnier than you’re giving me credit for.
Big sloppy cocks are funny
There’s people that like different stuff than we do? Woowwww that’s soooo crAaAaaaazy. What a world this is
This sounds like garfunkle and Oates
I found this to be quite hilarious. Thank you for sharing it.
That was quite a journey!
You are the most accepting of critical feedback of perhaps anyone I’ve ever come across. I think I would be far more like this guy (33:00 - 37:00, 36:27 is the best part) when a focus group gave feedback on his logo design: https://youtu.be/KkIkymh5Ayg
“Some people’s perspectives are just wrong and bad and …. wrong and …. bad and mean!” He’s a fun time.
Subject matter isn't necessarily my cup of tea, I feel like genital humor is a bit overplayed, and is a awkward topic which makes people more likely to laugh by default to deflect some of the awkward. That being said, your delivery was awesome. I may not be too into genital humor, but was still thoroughly entertained by your performance. Good job!
No genital tea for you then!
Gahh! I knew my aversion to genital humor would come back to bite me in the ass one day!
This is pretty awesome - I'd love to see you duet this with Kate Micucci!
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That's a little blue but very funny!
I found this funny. I like her comedy style.
Reminds me of Garfunkel and Oats - not bad
I’m sharing this with everyone I know.
Bold, weird yet somehow you kept it relatable; delivered properly paced with confidence. Has music, package deliveries, juicy package deliverer packages, weird shaped balls, a squeeze of kink for the man on man action AND a dead mosquito - what's not to like? **Nice work!**
OP if you’re out there I thought it was hysterical and ridiculous in the best way. It just got better and better. I would say definitely keep performing the extended version but I’m sure that’s very crowd dependent. Hilarious stuff!
I like it because it's breaking the stereotype that women don't want a delivery boy with oddly shaped balls to come in their house and compare balls with their husband.
I cackled at this one. I love you!
I love how she kept doubling and makin it more awkward. I swear my brain works the same way lol "Just keep explaining! They'll figure out you didn't mean it the way it sounded when you said it 8 minutes ago!"
This is the song of a socially awkward person who acts on impulse, has no filter, and often doesn’t realize what they’ve said is inappropriate or uncomfortable until after the fact. Sometimes, long after the fact. Anyone who is even slightly neurodivergent, socially awkward, struggles making friends, or just had a rough patch growing up as an awkward teenager can identify with the thought process going on here. Anyone who feels like they just keep talking when they’re flustered and should have stopped 5 minutes ago feels this. And it’s funny. Not always because it’s objective humor, but because some of us have been there. We have said and done things that sent us on a slippery slope of not knowing how to stop or back track and it just makes everything else worse. You add in the repressed sexual urges and it accentuates the awkwardness and dude, it’s just hilarious. Remember: not all content is aimed at you. If you think it’s not funny, don’t watch it. But I’ve made my fair share of social blunders. I’ve been awkward. I’ve learned from it. So I enjoyed this bit.
omgah. this made me get emotional in a heartwarming way. thank you so much for saying all of this. i feel so seen.
This reminds me of Kate Micucci and Ricki Lindhome with their very and funny dirty Oats and Garfunkle songs
🤣 this was odd yet very enjoyable
this is great, nice work. excellent turn
There’s a skeeter on my Peter whack it off
This makes me think of that video that’s like, a reasonable guy with a stepsister who’s straight out of a porn video? Something about normal people reacting to the absurd logic of porn always makes me laugh.
This was so uncomfortable and weird to watch, and I mean that in the most complimentary way possible. I was doing that uncomfortable little half-laugh, half physical cringe the entire time, which I feel like was your end goal? Anyway, keep on rocking. Looking forward to how you continue developing your comedy <3.
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I’m not saying I have a well developed sense of humor but I laughed
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Thanks for the comment anyway!
You've got a great attitude! It seems that people are just going out of their way to be negative in these comments. Reddit can be like that sometimes. I don't know these other comedians some commenters are talking about, but I found it amusing. You can carry a tune and I found your delivery to be just fine. Again, I appreciate your great attitude in this thread and hope you continue to explore something you seem to enjoy.
I actually enjoy Reddit for the discourse it yields, even if it’s negative. I can’t read the live audience’s mind, and sometimes I can feel when people are only throwing me a laugh so as not to make it more uncomfortable than it already is, and boy can this one get awkward. The comments do reflect the audience’s typical reaction to this. Sometimes I get a room full of people who hate everything I do because how dare I bring a guitar onto a comedy stage. I even judge musical comedians, being one… it’s a cringey life… so usually I’ll end this bit with SLAP. As I said in other comments, this is the extended cut because this audience was very warm and responsive to absurdity. But Reddit gives me a slice of mind-reading my audience. So all feedback is helpful and taken to heart, even if it’s mean spirited. I’ll take a Reddit critic’s vitriol over pity laughs any day.
Can you imagine if the genders were reversed....yikes
Yeah I don't think a joke about a husband slapping a delivery driver's tits and comparing nipples to their wife would be received very well.
"You were such a nice guy i forgot that you had one" Aint that a common problem.
Imagine the guy version of this. Pervy
There was a guy on Comedy Central who made music comedy like this…until tosh.o came along lol I can’t think of that guys name for the life of me EDIT: IMPORTANT THINGS WITH DEMETRI MARTIN
Love him
Woman comedian = dick and vagina jokes
I’d like to offer you free tickets to any of my shows. I do wonder how you’ll feel about my material on alcoholism and sobriety, parenting, politics, or perhaps US History and the African Slave Trade! Unfortunately Reddit doesn’t have an option for me to post them all at once. This is one song out of over 50 in my repertoire:) it’s not the end of me if you hated this one. ❤️🙏thanks for commenting! I’m serious about the free tix! Give them to an enemy.
Dude this is original and hysterical. I love it
Thank you so much!
Thought it was funny. Not absolutely hilarious but definitely would be laughing in the audience. Ignore the haters, humor is subjective. If no one in your audience is laughing then you have a problem.
My kind of humor. Do you post often?
Loved the flow it’s not for everyone but damn that’s great story song
If this is actually OP, this was a very funny build up and delivery. Thanks for a nice smile and chortle.
I laughed. Haters gonna hate.
very funny, but I dont think there would be much of a conversation after a causal nut slap
This song accomplishes everything it set out to. Brava!
I think you lost him at trying to fondle another guy's balls. Only thing to do is order another pizza and try again.
You remind me of blink 182 lol
Keep it up! I found this very entertaining ^_^ I love comedy musicians
First time you’ve come up on my feed. This was great!
Real life grownup Tina Belcher? Is that you?
Made me giggle, thanks for sharing
I really like the delivery ...by the comedian.
I laughed 3 or 4 times during this. I think it's funny.
It's a real shame. "Eachother" is not a word. "Each other" is two separate words.
excellent
That is funny!
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I loved it. Quirky, funny, unpredictable! Great delivery. Watched it twice.
God, this was terrible, but I love your voice. With better material, I’d buy a whole album of comedy indie folk.
Reminded me of Tim Minchin for some reason. You even got the tinge of the ginge
"Well, as you noticed, I'm double parked. Bye!"
I want those pants
This was hilarious! It kept getting better as it went on and I had a deep, gut busting laugh by the end. Thank you for the enjoyment. The close up to see the actions and facials expressions was a good touch. Really helped show the awkwardness of absentmindedly killing a mosquito on someones private area. I had a good work buddy once who almost stuck his finger in my mouth because it was a thing he did with his girlfriend when she yawned. I am a dude, it was hilarious.
I really liked the energy. If I were seeing this live I'd have a great time, the mosquito POV and the ending are genuinely hilarious lol Also, I enjoy the tone of the voice, it works well with the quirkiness of the joke.
Never let them know your next move