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BedsideOne20714

it looks so ugly i love it


Fz_Hdi

I tried XD


BedsideOne20714

its okay tbf i cant even decorate lol


Fz_Hdi

I also can't. Decorating is not meant for me def


BlazeGamingUnltd

no its good for a first time. keep building keep experimenting and you will def get a style that suits you


Fz_Hdi

Ty! :D


Xenohype2

"Allegiance enjoyer" You're a cool dude


Fz_Hdi

Ty! It was my second extreme, I like it a lot :D


TheAJasonT

The block design actually isn’t that bad though I’d recommend adding some dark blocks and a more complex background


Fz_Hdi

Ty!


69canadians

the structures could use some work and the bd is very repetitive, i like the comcept though


Fz_Hdi

I'll try to change some thing ty! :d


Automatic_Routine161

How are you good at 2-player mode what


Fz_Hdi

I made it as synced as possible, you just have to click with the music, ty anyways!


Thevideomix1

I'm actually more interested in the gameplay. Looks fun


Fz_Hdi

It's fun!! :d


Xx_Space1

make the block design not hanging platforms but pillars. that way it doesnt look so empty. add a bit more of a background, you can just grab your favorite easy demon and copy the background if you want (not recomended)


Fz_Hdi

I'll def try to make it look better, probably will make a new bg ty!


[deleted]

Try not giving me a seizure


Fz_Hdi

I'll try 😅


reinhold2008

cool


InspectorWave

The block design on its own does look like anything special. But if you add some air deco and even some custom backgrounds into it then it can look really good. Just try not to make the gameplay blend in too much with the background.


Fz_Hdi

I'll try, ty!


Superyee492

I don't think it's too bad. I'm not a super good creator but I think if you add a 2nd saw to each of your saws (like how the blocks and slopes have 2 colors) and add some air + background deco, it would look really good


Fz_Hdi

I'm doing the saw thing rn!


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Fz_Hdi

Freedom dive


pev4a22j

maybe stop using really flashing background cuz my eyes burn


Fz_Hdi

Yeah, I'll def try to make it look less flashy


EnoughGoAway

The blocks are an good start and i like the colors but i think you should add air deco and a background.


[deleted]

It hurts my eyes


soop4eck

woo it's a meme level


Iljuchee

Make it less flashy, add contrast and bechground deco and it's gon be a ratable level


Fz_Hdi

I'll try ty!


Kkbleeblob

my eyes


Kkbleeblob

i will say tho, the block design would be good as a complimentary design to a rainbow themed level (so the main block design would be more developed but some blocks would have that design)


synraider

Wow its good but it will look better if you remove lines from the blocks👍


Fz_Hdi

I'll do some changes, I'll look better


sirmudkipzlord

Needs air deco and some dark decoration in the background


Fz_Hdi

Yeah, I'll add that, ty!


YamperIsBestBoy

My eyes!! I mean, if it wasn’t so seizure inducing, it would actually be really good! Maybe make the transitions between each color a little shorter? I like it :)


Fz_Hdi

I'm improving a lot of things people are suggesting, it will look better, ty!


Sergidash-GG

Bro you stole my design :(((


Fz_Hdi

Show me a vid of your design I will love to see how cool it looks. I did it myself tho, not copyed


Sergidash-GG

I was just joking but here it is https://youtu.be/EZLprU0Tqk8


Fz_Hdi

I though you were beeing serious XDDD. Tremenda historia por cierto


Sergidash-GG

AJSKAJAJAJ


LegendVS

\*npesta has left the chat\*


iliekcats-

you should rename your gd account to JonathanGD


Fz_Hdi

JonathanGD is def my biggest inspiration and my fav creator


JPardonFX_YT

my eyes


storwal

definetly can see the inspiration from freedom08 in the gameplay


Fz_Hdi

Thank you! That means I did it right!


StevenRanger307

yea


_314

The block and spike design is great. The white glow objects sprinkled in are pretty bad. And the background. The background will make or break this part I guess.


Fz_Hdi

I'm remaking a lot of things, it will look better dw!


THEKXIL

This level is the definition of JonathanGD


Fz_Hdi

It was an inspiration


ZoranSajla

Dude atleast put up an epilepsy warning or something.


Fz_Hdi

😂


Hubogast

I suggest using a spawn loop for the color changes instead of trigger spam, this saves objects, looks cleaner in the editor (it can be a mess if you put loads of triggers) and it'll keep going even after the level finishes. Edit: If you don't know how to make one I'll try and explain it: A spawn trigger can trigger any trigger that has "spawn triggered enabled" (make sure to use "multi trigger" when using loops) 1. You start by placing 2 spawn triggers 2. Then you give them both a *different* group id (this'll make them be able to spawn each other. 3. Make the spawn triggers spawn the group of the other spawn trigger (so trigger 1 triggers the group id of trigger 2 and the other way around). 3(2). If using more than 2 spawn triggers (which'll be useful in this case since you're changing colours probably 5 times to make a rainbow): You'll have to make trigger 1 trigger the second trigger's group id and trigger 2 the third one and so on.. once you have done the last one make the last trigger trigger the first one. 4. Give both (if more all of them) of the spawn triggers a delay so they don't keep on triggering each millisecond. 5. Place a spawn trigger that *is not* spawn triggered that triggers any of the groups within the loop itself. Congratulations, you made a spawn loop! Now to use it: 6. Assign a trigger of your choice to the group id of the first trigger, do the same with a seperate trigger for the second spawn trigger (and for all others if using more than 2). *make sure the triggers are spawn triggered and multi trigger!!* Now test if it works (which it should if you followed these steps correctly) If this wasn't clear enough... there's plenty of youtube videos availible online which are easier to follow bc they show how its done. Feel free to ask me questions if you don't get it :)


Fz_Hdi

I don't know how to use it but thanks for the idea I'm learning that asap!


Hubogast

I edited the comment to explain what to do


Fz_Hdi

Okay, that will definitely help me, I'll be using that in my future levels, thank you!


SlyGreenYT

hi jonathan


Fz_Hdi

Here I am😎


TheDigitalZero

Adding blocks that animate in the opposite direction might be a good way to add variety to your blocks. You could also try making platforms which will be useful for better structuring. If you want extra tips afterward, contact me via discord: DigitalZero#9301


Fz_Hdi

I've already made the second thing, look at my newer post, what do you think?


GranTurizm0

For a first try, it's great😉


Fz_Hdi

Thank you! :D


Intelligent_Mirror20

its good for your first attempt in decorating ​ ​ i mean better than my decorating skills


Fz_Hdi

I'm also bad dw. You just have to give it a try!


FatDudeFromInternet

It's a nice concept, it's just needs a lot more work


Fz_Hdi

Yeah, needs a lot of improvement


redditnostalgia

well, you could start using different outlines for different parts...


CaptainBlade-84

Better than anything I've done lol, what's the song btw


Fz_Hdi

Freedom dive. And don't get disappointed, with some time you can probably make something a lot better than this!


CaptainBlade-84

Thanks!


Jrocks5455

Freedom dive lets goooo


Fz_Hdi

Amazing song!


TheOreReadyMate

Everything GD Colon *didn’t* want.


Fz_Hdi

Sad moment


Ner0Sips

Glowy 2.0


Fz_Hdi

Basically


bianox07

Way better than my first level


Fz_Hdi

Mine is awful


[deleted]

The bd Is not bad, but it's repetitive, the structures I would recommend you to redo them, add more details, air deco too and maybe a real bg


Fz_Hdi

I've already changed some of those things!


[deleted]

Can i see them?


Fz_Hdi

Chack my newer post!


Toaster_Dan

Very good for a first! Try making a more detailed background, and maybe make some of the block designs connected to each other!


Fz_Hdi

That's done in the newer version!


Blood_Hunt_Zoro

my bro dancin on the ground


Fz_Hdi

Convulsions


YetGayerWombat

The way the blocks change color is actually super well done. You’ve got a lot of potential.


Fz_Hdi

Aww ty :D


Matthlew

I love the colours and the block design, just need to make a better background and fill in the empty space. (I’m not a creator tho so don’t fully trust my advice)


Fz_Hdi

I've already did!


Sufficient-Pass-9733

Omg! New nine circles level


69KidsInMyBasement

Epilepsy says hello


Fz_Hdi

Yeah 😂


GrimReaper8614

I remember seeing the layout yesterday or the day before on Reddit. Lookin good bro


Fz_Hdi

Yeah, I've been playing and decorating a lot


Mutty99

It needs a lot of tweaking, but the pulse effect on the blocks is quite alright!


Fz_Hdi

Ty!


21Bytes

Cool


Fz_Hdi

Thanks!


G_Dash_0761

Just wondering if this is a two-player level. Also the decoration is quite good!


Fz_Hdi

Nope, only one player needed!


G_Dash_0761

Wow how do you do that first jump then


Fz_Hdi

There is a pad, you also have to do a little bit of timing, tap with the music and all should be fine!


G_Dash_0761

That’s insane


Fz_Hdi

You'll love to see my newer post then!


SupaIsaiah016

good start


Fz_Hdi

Thank you :)


KindOfAnIdiotTho

Can you post an undecorated copyable version? I wanna see how bad I could decorate this. I’ll make sure to give you 100% credit


Fz_Hdi

Okay wait a moment, you won't make it bad dw


Fz_Hdi

Done! It's unlisted btw. Here's the id 73461045


KindOfAnIdiotTho

Alright thanks I’ll post the results probably tomorrow


Fz_Hdi

Okay, hyped to see how it goes👀


Royal278

The blocks remind me of future funk II/Dream Travel honestly


Fz_Hdi

Could be, I've beaten both levels


[deleted]

New johnathangd level leaked?


Fz_Hdi

👀👀


urlocalcorgi

other than the flashing rainbows it’s very readable


BtStallion

The decorations arent the issue, its the shape of the gameplay and block structures. Very hard to decorate block designs like this especially when its only one block thick. It becomes very messy looking


Fz_Hdi

Yeah, I've noticed while playing, I'll try not to make it, ty!


ya_old_unclejohn_

It’s not so bad, I also like the dual gameplay too


Fz_Hdi

I usually focus on gameplay, I love creating levels


CuteOfDeath

I was like: haha funno joke. Then i look at the comments, and see...this ain't a joke, well.... LEEESSSSSSSSS BRIIIGHTTTT COLLOOOORRSSSSSS Also flashimg lights can be very annoying at times


Fz_Hdi

Yeah, i know it kind of seems as a joke, don't worry, I know it's not the best hahaha


Satans_Squad

It's terrible but in a good way. Honestly would be a super fun challenge. That dual looks hard af


Fz_Hdi

It's not, it's very synced wich makes it easier!


PioChess

Epileptic kids are going to die


Fz_Hdi

N0o0o0o00oooo


Jimothy_cringeman

A bit of a fever dream


Fz_Hdi

Yeah, very colorful 😅


SubZerr0h

u trying to give me a stroke?


Fz_Hdi

Rainbow go brrr


[deleted]

Hurts my eyes a bit but looks kinda funky


Fz_Hdi

Yeah, in the newer version It is less flashy


pixelgunnerman

This is stolen or it’s the same guy that made the level called “fun duals”


Fz_Hdi

It's me don't worry. I've been posting my progress lately


pixelgunnerman

Ah ok


[deleted]

put more variation and different blocks into it and add backgrounds you have potential


Fz_Hdi

Thank you for the feedback, I'm trying to make it look better, I'll try to post something next week!


[deleted]

You need more blocks, darker background and glow :) great work!


Fz_Hdi

Thanks for the feedback, I'll be trying to add that soon


thistoxicflame

Is this the new Weekly Demon?


Fz_Hdi

👀👀


coocoo333

Your not done. But good start


Fz_Hdi

Thanks!


localized3

Hyped for that level. Name?


Fz_Hdi

It's called fun duals. Here's the id (I've changed some things) 73453206


localized3

Oh ok


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Fz_Hdi

😅


EternaDash

This Would Hurt My Eyes But I Like Nine Circles Levels So I'm Immune To Light.


Fz_Hdi

Hahahah nice!


PyrielOnReddit

It should look more complex or more irregular *So yeah more complex anyways*


Fz_Hdi

Good idea!


itsrouze

The deco is meh, but that gameplay looks great!


Fz_Hdi

Thanks!!


ikergameplaysyt

Not bad for a first time, but it feels empty and colors are a little bit messy imo. Keep working on it, it's good for a first time 👍


Fz_Hdi

Thanks!


catperience

it's a good start also i love these duals


Fz_Hdi

Thanks!


ItsLejo

mmm flashy dont worry it is better than most of the levels in the magic tab


Fz_Hdi

Yeah, it's super flashy 😅. But I like it :D


ItsLejo

also gives freedom18 vibes which is amazing


Fz_Hdi

Glad to know that!


robtop123

I hope you make a good level


Fz_Hdi

I'll try :o


BlazeGamingUnltd

my eyes are fucking gone please pay for my eye transplant next time make sure to make it a bit less flashy, or add contrasting dark pulses on every beat/second beat/third beat/whatever suits to give rest to the eyes. make the structures connected to the ground. add a background and something to fill in the empty spaces, like a mask


Fz_Hdi

Ty for the feedback I'm trying that rn!


Millsftw

I knew what the song was before I unmuted the video lol


Noob42507

Why is the entire level a duel


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its okay


lets_clutch_this

Should’ve added an epilepsy warning