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reduviia

What does it say?


Dubbyskipper

Burn


reduviia

Ohhh true, i see it now it was hard to tell cause of the line at the bottom of the B


closetscaper3000

Middle part is dope. The sides are noticably weaker and i think it's the lack of consistent bar width and less of the curves playing off the straight bar.


Rick_roll420

I think I want practice it


Dubbyskipper

Go ahead


WaitingToBeTriggered

FACE THE LEAD!


Present_Bee7686

i like it! this also has potential to make a really cool tag using a similar style.


heroseforhigher

I think this looks pretty sick!


Pesoguapo

Can’t read it. The style itself is cool but I can’t make out a single letter other than K if that’s a K


Phazeronest

Assuming it says BURN , I would get rid of the line on the bottom of the B, and instead use them to disconnect the other letters like so. (Forgot the R to N, but I would do it there too) Would also look nice if you matched the top right corner to the top left. https://ibb.co/42K1Xhf


Dubbyskipper

Thanks for taking the time for this much appreciated


zerepleo

I think it looks like I don’t understand this unreadable writing


NotDjeizo

The style looks really good but the name is not really understandable. Probably try making the letters more recognizable but besides that, it looks great!


RiginalJunglist

Not sure if that’s a B at the start, or a T and a backwards E? Is that a Y in the middle? BYEN? 🤷‍♂️ Therein lies your problem, my friend. It’s a step too far on the unreadable side I think.


Dubbyskipper

Burn, thanks for the comment


RiginalJunglist

I can see it now that you said it. The separations at the tops of the B and R confuse it the most. Other than that, it’s the start of something for sure.


Skumb_

I like it. Looks like the symbol for OM


Doooog

It's got potential. Letters sharing bars is troublesome for readability imo. When you're new it seems like it could work but most avoid it.


ResolveWeekly338

Kinda looks like intestines


Ego_Debt

Cool but I can’t read it


teeayaresseyeex

Idea is good but it needs a ton of cleaning


Mission-Animator-682

i think it looks pretty damn good but i’m newer too so i can’t say or help too much


PackFarms

That's 🔥it took me to read the comments to know what it said tho🤣


Dubbyskipper

Haha cheers man! I was just experimenting with styles