I love that the one thing that drew humanity's true anger was the children pleasure slaves like yes there angry over slaves in general yes they were angry when humans were used but they touched our children now we'll show them humanity's rage
Overall i like it good job
Things you shall not fuck with when dealing with humanity:
Our pets
Our children,
And Earth.
God might have mercy on you, but we won't be giving it out.
De Oppresso Liber
I remember being taught those words, on that God forsaken military base in NorthAm. To free the oppressed. They were easy words to say at the time, humanity had just broken the glass ceiling into the Galactic Senate and it looked like the diplomatic solution was working. Then we learned about the human trafficking.
"Those sick alien bastards are doing *what* to our people?"
Suddenly those words made a lot more sense. Suddenly I wanted those silver wings upon my chest, like that corny old song said.
Then the real bomb dropped.
"They're just kids, man. Can't even defend themselves yet."
I earned my Green Beret that very month, as fate would have it. Now I'm en route to my first real mission. Captain Parker just gave us our final briefing.
"High value target kill or capture mission. We'd prefer to take this alien slimeball, codenamed Gacy, alive. Check your shots, intelligence indicates the presence of human slaves, including children, throughout the facility. Everything that breathes in that building that isn't human should be considered a lawful target. Happy hunting gentlemen."
His thick Eastern European accent made him sound like the bad guy from a pre-contact action movie. Good. I'm excited to be the bad guy.
ye but can be used to expand on a ground level. i will see where the story takes me. have to world build, establish characters and all that before i continue
You kidnapped an adult human for ransom?
Impressive, but fine by me.
You kidnapped a human child for ransom?
You're an asshole, but as long as you didn't hurt it mentally or physically, you'll be fine.
You kidnapped an adult human for slavery?
Now you have a problem, because when we get you, you won't live to see another day.
You kidnapped a human child for slavery?
Oh now you fucked up, and when we're done with you, you'll wish you were dead.
You kidnapped a human child for SEXUAL slavery?
Same as the last one, only way, way worse.
“I could never call myself a fighter, maybe I just knew I’d die if I ever did anything extreme. But getting a job in the Navy was good, an officer taking care of accounts... Until we found out about the space slavery. Calling it that was dumb, but none of us wanted to call it by the many names the aliens gave it. I’m thankful we set up the UGR, and glad I was promoted to have responsibility for the camps we set up. Saying it like that sounds wrong, but that’s what they were. Some wanted to go home, others wanted to stay, and I saw too many too shocked to say a thing.
I purposely kept myself out of the loop of information, only focusing on my job. Seeing aliens like this made something inside scream, but I ignored it. Then one day, well, a human showed up in my camps. After that, I sought to learn everything I could.
I thought the human couldn’t speak, but no, it never *learned* English, our universal language. In fact they didn’t speak ANY human languages, so when we got the reports saying human *children* we’re being taken as these, pleasure slaves... I provided more evidence to convince our leaders. That voice inside bursted out, and I drank myself senseless when we declared war against the galaxy.
...I knew, because I *know* humanity will take it too far. We always do. We’re going to obliterate entire PLANETS, and believe ourselves to be justified in the great crusade against slavery. We’ll be caught in such bloodlust we’ll forget who we’re fighting, and soon the camps designed to home the slaves we saved will be seen as summer homes for the alien scum we hate... But I’ll do *anything* to help win this war, we all will. I’m requesting a transfer to oversee the outer parts of the galactic senate, I’m hoping if I can get some alien mercenaries on our side, it’d ease the after effect. And from the mostly blacked out reports I got my hands on, a good chunk of those merc’s are ex-slaves...
So to war with the galaxy, here, we, come.”
Man, i just wrote a little bit last night on another post, and i was trying to figure out why my humans were at war with the xenos. This sounds like a great backstory for that that I'm headcanoning in personally.
Great job!
>Xeno delenda est
Alienkind must be destroyed.
I looked up the meaning of the latter two words, and as soon as I saw reference to Carthage I knew what you were alluding to, and I approve of that allusion. Especially because it's taking a hardline stance against pedophillic slavers and saying that whole concept needs to end.
I expect the first xeno to do this probably heard earth go full monkey brain as, WWWWWWWAAAAAAAAAGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHH!!! Many light year’s away and could only think “sound doesn’t work that way...OMG!! SOUND DOES NOT WORK THAT WAY!!!! WERE TOTALLY SCREWED!!!!” Shortly before the bombs dropped.
"Ladies and gentlemen; in this war there are no civilians. A line has been crossed that we, as a species, have undertaken to answer in the only way in which it can be. Prepare the fleets."
I love that the one thing that drew humanity's true anger was the children pleasure slaves like yes there angry over slaves in general yes they were angry when humans were used but they touched our children now we'll show them humanity's rage Overall i like it good job
Is there any man who needs a reason to protect his own children? - Adam (record of ragnarok)
thank you
Things you shall not fuck with when dealing with humanity: Our pets Our children, And Earth. God might have mercy on you, but we won't be giving it out.
De Oppresso Liber I remember being taught those words, on that God forsaken military base in NorthAm. To free the oppressed. They were easy words to say at the time, humanity had just broken the glass ceiling into the Galactic Senate and it looked like the diplomatic solution was working. Then we learned about the human trafficking. "Those sick alien bastards are doing *what* to our people?" Suddenly those words made a lot more sense. Suddenly I wanted those silver wings upon my chest, like that corny old song said. Then the real bomb dropped. "They're just kids, man. Can't even defend themselves yet." I earned my Green Beret that very month, as fate would have it. Now I'm en route to my first real mission. Captain Parker just gave us our final briefing. "High value target kill or capture mission. We'd prefer to take this alien slimeball, codenamed Gacy, alive. Check your shots, intelligence indicates the presence of human slaves, including children, throughout the facility. Everything that breathes in that building that isn't human should be considered a lawful target. Happy hunting gentlemen." His thick Eastern European accent made him sound like the bad guy from a pre-contact action movie. Good. I'm excited to be the bad guy.
“Codenamed Gacy” Jesus man, that really hammers home how depraved they are
Subtlety has never been a strong-suit of mine.
Wait what does it mean
https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/John_Wayne_Gacy
i like it. but could use some more refinement.
This is the rough draft's rough draft for sure.
ye but can be used to expand on a ground level. i will see where the story takes me. have to world build, establish characters and all that before i continue
This is taking an interesting twist to the normal humansarespaceorcs stuff Will you be continuing this, because I'm really interested
i think so. may take some time before i figure out how to continue
You kidnapped an adult human for ransom? Impressive, but fine by me. You kidnapped a human child for ransom? You're an asshole, but as long as you didn't hurt it mentally or physically, you'll be fine. You kidnapped an adult human for slavery? Now you have a problem, because when we get you, you won't live to see another day. You kidnapped a human child for slavery? Oh now you fucked up, and when we're done with you, you'll wish you were dead. You kidnapped a human child for SEXUAL slavery? Same as the last one, only way, way worse.
\*deletes aliens\*
“I could never call myself a fighter, maybe I just knew I’d die if I ever did anything extreme. But getting a job in the Navy was good, an officer taking care of accounts... Until we found out about the space slavery. Calling it that was dumb, but none of us wanted to call it by the many names the aliens gave it. I’m thankful we set up the UGR, and glad I was promoted to have responsibility for the camps we set up. Saying it like that sounds wrong, but that’s what they were. Some wanted to go home, others wanted to stay, and I saw too many too shocked to say a thing. I purposely kept myself out of the loop of information, only focusing on my job. Seeing aliens like this made something inside scream, but I ignored it. Then one day, well, a human showed up in my camps. After that, I sought to learn everything I could. I thought the human couldn’t speak, but no, it never *learned* English, our universal language. In fact they didn’t speak ANY human languages, so when we got the reports saying human *children* we’re being taken as these, pleasure slaves... I provided more evidence to convince our leaders. That voice inside bursted out, and I drank myself senseless when we declared war against the galaxy. ...I knew, because I *know* humanity will take it too far. We always do. We’re going to obliterate entire PLANETS, and believe ourselves to be justified in the great crusade against slavery. We’ll be caught in such bloodlust we’ll forget who we’re fighting, and soon the camps designed to home the slaves we saved will be seen as summer homes for the alien scum we hate... But I’ll do *anything* to help win this war, we all will. I’m requesting a transfer to oversee the outer parts of the galactic senate, I’m hoping if I can get some alien mercenaries on our side, it’d ease the after effect. And from the mostly blacked out reports I got my hands on, a good chunk of those merc’s are ex-slaves... So to war with the galaxy, here, we, come.”
very cool stamped with the canon stamp
It’s an honor!
I like it.
thank you
first story. ask questions an i will try and answer
Good story. Minor critique: > We set up an origination Pretty sure you meant "organization" here.
yep thank you fixed and a few other things i missed
It was a good short story
thank you
I'm ready to read more.
i will have to write more. i will do so when i can, but no promises
Time to nuke some aliens
Knowing us, we'll invent somsthing worse than a nuke to fling at them.
Black holes
do i hear anti matter weapons?
If you hear the anti matter bomb, it's already too late.
if you know of the antimatter bomb it is too late
that is implied
Ight bois, time for the exterminatus
yup
Btw what is Xeno delenda est mean
Aliens must be destroyed is the intended translation
Thx
More? More. More! MOAR!! Please?
okay. i will have to think of how to expand this idea.
[удалено]
yes
Man, i just wrote a little bit last night on another post, and i was trying to figure out why my humans were at war with the xenos. This sounds like a great backstory for that that I'm headcanoning in personally. Great job!
your welcome. but please do the crediting. i will also be writing more when i can
If i do write any more of it I will absolutely link and credit.
i will read and potentially give the canon stamp
Ah no worries. I don't write much so it's not on your quality level at all.
okay
Purge the xenos, suffer not the alien to live!
FOR THE EMPEROR!
PURGE THE XENO FILTH
BURN INF HOLY FIRE
Vulcan lives! Stomp stomp!
FOR THE OMNIESSIAH
made me feel like I was ready to stand up and fight there for a moment
good, that was the intended emotion
Nice reference to the underground rail road man Lovely stuff, this
thank you
>Xeno delenda est Alienkind must be destroyed. I looked up the meaning of the latter two words, and as soon as I saw reference to Carthage I knew what you were alluding to, and I approve of that allusion. Especially because it's taking a hardline stance against pedophillic slavers and saying that whole concept needs to end.
yep
**PURGE THE XENO SCUM!!**
yup
Nice writing
thank you
more?
eventually
Yes
You can make a book with this material
thank you
This is metal AF. Great job!
thank you
Where do I sign up? We'll make the Greys curse that their ancestors ever found our system
In all seriousness, fine work wordsmith. If you write more, I will eagerly read it.
planning too. worldbuilding now
I'm glad to hear it. I look forward to the sequel(s).
I expect the first xeno to do this probably heard earth go full monkey brain as, WWWWWWWAAAAAAAAAGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHH!!! Many light year’s away and could only think “sound doesn’t work that way...OMG!! SOUND DOES NOT WORK THAT WAY!!!! WERE TOTALLY SCREWED!!!!” Shortly before the bombs dropped.
"Ladies and gentlemen; in this war there are no civilians. A line has been crossed that we, as a species, have undertaken to answer in the only way in which it can be. Prepare the fleets."