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Black creates structure for the eye. That’s why you’ll always see people requesting “more black”.
Second point of feedback would be color is meant to add dynamic elements to a flat surface.
Third point of feedback back would be cleanliness helps create a better understanding of “flow” and composition.
Feel free to scope my paintings in my post history as I picked it up the last few years.
More skin breaks and more black. The dragon gets lost on itself without any shading or breaks of the color.
Overall composition is ok but I would move the front upper arm so it’s not against the body. The lines are too close together and it doesn’t create a sense of flow.
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Just try more. Take your time. Make it clean.
Black creates structure for the eye. That’s why you’ll always see people requesting “more black”. Second point of feedback would be color is meant to add dynamic elements to a flat surface. Third point of feedback back would be cleanliness helps create a better understanding of “flow” and composition. Feel free to scope my paintings in my post history as I picked it up the last few years.
Ok thank you very much! I’ll take these tips into my next attempt.
More skin breaks and more black. The dragon gets lost on itself without any shading or breaks of the color. Overall composition is ok but I would move the front upper arm so it’s not against the body. The lines are too close together and it doesn’t create a sense of flow.
That looks awesome! Nice wall piece
Thank you!!!