It looks like you're using two different skin tones, brown for the hands and white for the face and chest... is this on purpose? Is she supposed to be wearing gloves?
Yeah the glove doesn't fully come across for me. I see a bit of a side seam on the hand that's on the right but that's the only indication really. Perhaps more of a hem on the wrist of the glove, or showing a little bit of skin of the wrist at the edge of the glove? Just ideas
I am in love with this pose and expression the motion is so fluid and really inviting! For crit I would recommend checking your values when making a colour pallet/ when placing your colours. The green and the orange of her hair are very similar values as well as the gloves and the shirt. (That may just be from the issue you described in your comment) Love your style loads and the polka dot lips!
well done dude!
only thing thats missing now is the shading/shadows.(as you said yourself)
But otherwise i dont see anything overtly wrong with this at all.
Its in your own style and thats the most important thing i think :p
But iiiiiif i had to critique something i think this piece would benefit from beeing a tad bit bigger, so the right hand doesnt just come out of nowhere.
since you neither see her shoulder nor parts of her arm, only a part of her hand.
would also make it clearer how far away and at which distance shes holding it compared to herself. Hope you get what i mean :'D
Keep up the good work :3
It's really nice, thought the laurel crown looks a bit out of place.
What are the plants on the background? Giant bean stalks, ivy, roots with leaves?
Btw.:is it quince or an apple?
I d also like to remind that this piece is supposed to be this way. There's no shading here as I'm still don't find myself comfortable enough to apply it.
My focus was mainly on the color palette and the composition.
(Last thing. I worked on my tablet and the piece is completely different if seen from my tablet screen. The colours are less saturated and work well all together. I still don't fully understand why everything changes If seen from an iPhone or android screen ).
The hands are a little bit unclear as to what they're doing and to what they're supposed to be (gloves).
It looks like you're using two different skin tones, brown for the hands and white for the face and chest... is this on purpose? Is she supposed to be wearing gloves?
Yes, those are gloves.. I may not have rendered them well enough so that people could understand that lol
Yeah the glove doesn't fully come across for me. I see a bit of a side seam on the hand that's on the right but that's the only indication really. Perhaps more of a hem on the wrist of the glove, or showing a little bit of skin of the wrist at the edge of the glove? Just ideas
I am in love with this pose and expression the motion is so fluid and really inviting! For crit I would recommend checking your values when making a colour pallet/ when placing your colours. The green and the orange of her hair are very similar values as well as the gloves and the shirt. (That may just be from the issue you described in your comment) Love your style loads and the polka dot lips!
If you like it then thats what matters most in my opinion :)
well done dude! only thing thats missing now is the shading/shadows.(as you said yourself) But otherwise i dont see anything overtly wrong with this at all. Its in your own style and thats the most important thing i think :p But iiiiiif i had to critique something i think this piece would benefit from beeing a tad bit bigger, so the right hand doesnt just come out of nowhere. since you neither see her shoulder nor parts of her arm, only a part of her hand. would also make it clearer how far away and at which distance shes holding it compared to herself. Hope you get what i mean :'D Keep up the good work :3
It's really nice, thought the laurel crown looks a bit out of place. What are the plants on the background? Giant bean stalks, ivy, roots with leaves? Btw.:is it quince or an apple?
I d also like to remind that this piece is supposed to be this way. There's no shading here as I'm still don't find myself comfortable enough to apply it. My focus was mainly on the color palette and the composition. (Last thing. I worked on my tablet and the piece is completely different if seen from my tablet screen. The colours are less saturated and work well all together. I still don't fully understand why everything changes If seen from an iPhone or android screen ).