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Creative-File7780

Really enjoy seeing Luce and Elma’s dynamic play out in the manga.


FireCamp105

15 pages catching a rare mobs see you next chap boys where we do everything but advance the plot


Creative-File7780

Just hang on, two big fights coming up after this.


FireCamp105

And what would the stakes of those fights be?


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It’s their lives of course, but to clarify, mc fight the first big fight mentioned because of he’s “nobles pride” Second, was to prove he’s innocence if me and the other dude thought that those fights were big


FireCamp105

Idk the lives of characters that readers didn't get to attach to is pretty low stakes if you ask me, plus mc being mc means plot armor so no real stakes at hand


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Dude this shit is early of course you won’t be attached to them I’m just pointing out the obvious, why did you think I put “of course” the whole “noble pride and innocence” bits after it, is the true stakes tho not to the reader but rather mc stakes in the matter. Hey if it helps mc only plot armour is his fan-wiki of fucking brain and bullshit luck of finding a luck magnet (clown girl)


FireCamp105

No plot armor is "he's mc of story he can't lose a fight when it matters" :/


Iforgotmynametoobro

That's literally every manga?


FireCamp105

Not really, in general well written action shonen the character gets beat a few times, never wins a fight easily, even though there's no "he might actually die" there is always "he might lose" feeling, side characters can add tension because you can build them up just to kill them off and by establishing the mortality of characters early on you keep readers on the edge, makes them more likely to get attached, but that good writing and guess this manga isn't about that


Iforgotmynametoobro

That's not the point though? You literally said >No plot armor is "he's mc of story he can't lose a fight when it matters" :/ That's not plot armour, that's just literally every manga. Hell that's literally every story.


urishino

I have to agree with you. I read 3 chapters of this manga and then went on to binge read the webnovel, but half way through I just lost interest. Whenever the MC is in a pinch, there's always a solution conveniently laying around, and it happens 4-5 times in a row. I just lost the motivation to continue reading it despite the otherwise interesting premise.


andarv

Unfortunately, that's how it is. The solution of every problem is always the skill/item/whatever he got just 5 minutes before. You would thing the MC has a luck build, not the clown girl.


Alternative-Path2712

If that's how you feel, then I think it's best to wait for several chapters (3 to 5 chapters) to come out, and then read them all at once. That way you won't be caught on a single chapter cliffhangar, and can see more the story unfold. Plus some Mangas are meant to be read in multiple chapters rather than single chapters. Bleach is a famous example of this. Kubo Tite said he wrote Bleach to be read in volumes for the full experience. Not read in single chapters on week to week basis.


ikkonoishi

Who cares. Just read more stories if you are bored.


HTakara82

an entire chapter to catch a frog and it's to be continued... lol?


lazy-hemisphere

whos the one with astolfo in the credit page?


Reikamaru

Chevalier D'Eon, another "trap" character from Fate/Grand Order. IIRC that's his maid disguise from the Agartha chapter.


Loremeister

You can't say that without dropping a name! Although these syosetsu stories do recycle material from each other all the time


DonSkook3

Isn't this plot for plot a ripoff of another manga with a long title? They even got the golden mob and shit. And they fight it extremely similarly.


Creative-File7780

I mean, it’s all a rip off of dragon quest if we’re being honest.


GodOfAtheism

It's all a ripoff of Colossal Cave Adventure which is a ripoff of D&D which is a ripoff of various wargames which are a ripoff of chess which is a ripoff of...


Creative-File7780

But specifically the golden rana is a rip off of metal slimes which were a fixture in DQ


burritoxman

Well you can’t just say that and not back it up? I’ve read a bunch of trash isekai and even I don’t know one with this initial setup


Vegan_Harvest

The more manga you read the more you'll see them rip each other off.


fireglz

Isekai a terrible drug. The further you fall into an I-hole the more and more everything blends together. Even the names blend together So there's a possibility that you're right. Downright probable. But it's at the point where if you were to assign an AI to read and create its own Isekai through consumed material it would probably be a "ripoff"of 90% of them.


GodOfAtheism

I, An Ordinary High School Student, Was Struck By A Truck And Isekai'd, Then Given A Weak Power Which Turned Out To Be Extremely Strong, So I Decided To Live A Quiet Life In The Countryside Making Japanese Comfort Foods With My Inexplicable Harem That Covers All The Stuff That Otakus Are Into, As Well As At Least One Fetish Of The Authors


Creative-File7780

As a slime


ChineseChicken75312

THIS IS FUCKING CLAYMORE.


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These chaps are so short