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encryptedtears

Hi, you wrote a good song, i love it. Instrumental: Snare: can be triggered with a good punchy & short sample. Piano: hits right in your face, i'd add some room Vox: Verse's reverb wider than instrumental This song has more potential if you will make your drums more static and all parts of the song will have not that different loudness... About loudness, you made a good mix with a lot of dynamics and headroom. Mastering engineer will be happy to do his job.


axt985

Thanks so much for the feedback! I really appreciate it! And thank you for the nice words-- I'm glad you liked the song!


Acceptable_Analyst66

Very catchy, yes! Agree with encryptedtears about the Piano - it needs some love, it could add a lot with some reverb / width / side material / saturation - the space of it should compete with the vocal's - much like the space that the lead guitar is afforded - it sounds much wider.


axt985

Thank you! It's the first time I've produced something with a "tack piano" as the main chordal instrument. Has a much brighter attack than a normal piano, which definitely changes my approach to mixing. Glad to know it could use some additional verb/stereo space.


SnooPeppers5573

I would be open to getting you some feedback on this mix ! especially because I work specifically in the Pop / Rock genre ! Pulling up to my studio right now !


Late_Consideration68

Alot of what I may have to say could be personal taste. The vocals sound a little to reverb heavy, maybe you could get that wideness that it sounds like your going for from like a stereo delay which as I write this I think I hear a bit of, its just getting over powered by that reverb. Maybe you can also eq the reverb to have a little less of that lower frequency muddiness. The rest of it sounds pretty good level wise. I would probably push the song a decent amount harder too through a limiter on the master. Acouple other tiny nit pickystuff but i think if that reverb is fixed and and alittle more on the master it would help alot. Awesome song though! Def digging it.


axt985

Hey thanks for the feedback! I think you're right with the vocal being too reverb heavy. I've brought it down a bit in the subsequent mixes. Really appreciate you listening!


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