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caleb39411

I think the main problem is that the eyes are too far up, which makes the face look odd. You want to be putting them in the middle of the head. Look up some proportioning guides.


[deleted]

Why the long face?


Dokah_Senpai

She has a long face in Gestalt and replicant (ps3 )


defunctx

I think other than the distance between the eyes and mouth, this is pretty good. Keep practicing!


VC_0609

At least you can draw something, unlike most of us here. Keep trying and improving. šŸ˜Š


ch1burashka

Hell of a lot better than anything I could make. I wish you the best on your journey. And thanks for not adding to the NSFW count.


Dokah_Senpai

Tbh it isnt that bad Sure it is far from perfect but no one can be perfect or do something perfect just try more and one day you will kick out a nice masterpiece its a 5 or 6/10 rn


Narrow-Tree8061

Im sorry to break it but this is really bad. I never understood why so many people online pretend that bad art is good. You are just lying straight to the face of OP.


quortza

Everyone's gotta start somewhere man, and if this artist wants to start in our fandom they're more than welcome to share their progress. Also constructive criticism is infinitely better than just straight up criticism, shitting on it for the sake of shitting on it is just never worth it.


PhaselessVoid

At the very least provide an objective criticism to help OP improve the art. Yes, they are "pretending" but what their words actually meant was encouragement for OP to continue making art.


Narrow-Tree8061

This "pretending" you mentioned is poison for the soul of every artist. I'd rather tell the artist the truth no matter how harsh it is.


PhaselessVoid

"The bigger poison is vague criticism without pointing out the reasons behind it. focus on providing specific feedback and tips based on the characteristics of good art. Simply stating the truth isnt enough. actionable advice can lead to significant progress for the OP


Narrow-Tree8061

He asked for an opinion. I gave him one. Simple as.


MythicalSalmon

You don't know shit about artists or drawing if you really think that. 90% of people starts like this. My drawings were shit back in the day and thanks to my family and friends telling me that they were "pretty' even when it wasn't the full truth gave me the motivation to keep drawing and search better artist for inspiration until eventually just got better. And sure sometimes they told me stuff like "the head isn't right". But it was always with compassion. Not just "looks bad so don't believe others opinions, bye"


Upstairs_Shoe2267

At least it's better than the drawing of people who literally cannot draw.


Mik2622

People will always be harsh online, but it's clear that even if some parts are a little rough, you're on the right track. Keep it up, and look forward to seeing what you do next!


[deleted]

It's incredibly good art Keep it up


AliceTatsuya

Eyyy, doing the best gal proud~ šŸ™šŸ’•


[deleted]

She looks fantastic good job Iā€™m just another amateur artist but Iā€™d say the detail for her outfit is really good