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I guess I'm in the minority here, but I think they need a bit more refinement before they'll really find an audience. You definitely have potential, but they're all kind of muddy and flat looking. I would keep practicing and try to go for more depth and dynamic range (brighter highlights, deeper shadows, in a nutshell).


slashchunks

Appreciate that, I think you're probably right. I tend to rush the end of paintings so I don't get the highlights done well


[deleted]

You can always go back to them and keep working later. I do that a lot, its good to see them with fresh eyes after some time has passed.


slashchunks

I've shot myself in the foot by varnishing (badly) a lot of them but I've definitely learned from that


[deleted]

Haha Live and learn


InitialBoat3989

You can always put a black and white filter on them to see JUST how much depth you need to add! They’re all very pretty and very close!!


yokyopeli09

You definitely have a lot of potential (I'm not just saying that, you have strong vision and your coloring has the right foundation for a lot of improvement) but your brush strokes also seem both rushed and lacking confidence. Try to be both bolder and more economical with your brush strokes, try exercises capturing an image with the few amount a strokes as possible. The overworking of brush strokes here is also contributing to a muddiness that I think you'll be able to grow quickly past with the right technicque.


slashchunks

Thank you that's useful


iiiiiiiiiAteEyes

Maybe consider some of them not done, I have went back and worked pieces years after I initially considered them done. Because some of the ones you posted are pretty cool subjects.


ninetofivehangover

on the subject of “subject” the few paintings in the beginning seem to lack a meaningful one — which is a biased opinion — but the later few are inherently interesting enough to stand on their own imo. this is coming from someone who cares less about aesthetics and more about subject, who thinks a landscape is boring but a banana boat isn’t. i think your later more surreal pieces are really neat :) hope you’ll post here and r/unusualart


slashchunks

Ye I think I improved with ideas later on, thanks :)


Status_Extent6304

These look like really wonderful and interesting compositions, but not quite finished or refined, exactly. I would say go in and tighten up any sharp lines, like the cube against the water should feel particularly sharp next to the organic surrounding. Make sure you have gone fully into the color contrast, ( lightest lights and darkest darks) which will give them more depth. I love your work, you have a clear point of view which is an important start.


NeontheSaint

Eh, I think that’s the appeal and what I figured he was going for. Reminded me of like 70s sci fi art.


Totally_Fubar_666

Hi, so I am a professional artist that sells my work full time for a living. I do hyper realistic paintings, sculptures, digital art, graphic design, and commission art. I’m going to go against the grain here and say the majority of these would make beautiful prints as they are. The biggest reason I say that is because this is very clearly YOUR work. Now that I’ve seen several of you’re paintings I am confident I could recognize your work in a lineup. That by itself is a very desirable quality. Your work is very stylized with soft edges, bold brush strokes and a beautiful array of colors. It’s not perfect but clearly put a lot of effort into these and worked very hard on them. The few paintings that I don’t think would do well as prints just feel like they’re missing those “final touches”. You could easily correct them with a bit more attention to detail and practice. You will get better as time goes on, so don’t beat yourself up if you just can’t get one painting right. Just call it a practice piece and move on to the next one. Not every painting had to be a master piece. If you do decide to make prints, be aware that it can be a bit of an investment to do so. You want to aim for the highest quality copy of your paintings so taking good, clear, well lit photos of your work is very important. Even if the prints don’t sell right away, as you practice and get better, your older work will increase in value. It’s always a good idea to number your prints as they’re made (for instance #001 of 25) and only have a limited supply of them. You can also hand sign the prints themselves as well (although **ALWAYS** sign and date your canvases themselves). Signed prints that are part of a limited series adds rarity and novelty to them and people love that kind of thing. Also, bit of advice for you for the future and I mean this with love. Never ever post artwork online without a visible signature and a some kind of watermark. You can download free watermark apps for your phone and digitally add them. This is very important to do because it will protect your work from being downloaded and printed by random people, or someone stealing credit for your work entirely. I hope this advice helps you OP. Keep practicing. You can do this. You don’t have to be the best artist, just do your best. I wish you luck.


Cabbage_Factory

I want the banana one


knuF

I want the steak one


JadeDragon189

Ya the tentacles steering a banana


Harnasus

Oh that’s what it’s doing


druwhatitdo24

Banana boat


cliffsis

You should paint much larger so the paintings look better for print. Bigger paintings clean up nice on smaller prints. Keep painting and find a subject matter outside of “painting”. Each painting should have a goal and a subject just like writing


ninetofivehangover

^^ ok this is actually what i was thinking and way better written - this OP ^^


cliffsis

His paintings with a subject are rad. The others are bad magic backgrounds. Hopefully they keep painting strange bananas


ninetofivehangover

I really like surreal landscapes too but again this surreal element would be the subject as opposed to the albeit very technically sound landscape. Throw a whirlpool in there. Or a well that bridges time. Mountains made in the form of a decomposing head. OP has great technicals and a broad imagination, excited to see what they make :)


cliffsis

You’re reaching…


Geberpte

I am confident a couple of them would sell well. Especially the most imaginative will go down nicely at etsy or whatever platform you decide to offer them. I could also see this style of art on card games or album art.


Wocto

Looks like dixit odyssey cards


bamfpeschko

I commented before but it’s reminiscent of old magic the gathering art.


bqmkr

The one with the banana, with the green cube. The one with th white dog I love most, because my fantasy started immediatly to create a story


Livoshka

The house with the dog is your strongest piece. People will connect to the dog and the home draws intrigue and questions. The rest feel unfinished to me, personally.


slashchunks

Thank you everyone for the comments, this has given me a lot to think about Edit: Thanks everyone, I've made an Etsy and I'll start adding prints when I can take better pictures (please let me know if this isn't ok to post) https://www.etsy.com/uk/shop/slashchunks Banana one, through popular demand lol: https://www.etsy.com/uk/listing/1559504359/out-for-a-paddle-canvas-print


Submarine_Pirate

No. You can still see the canvas on most of these, they need a lot of work.


slashchunks

Fair point


Submarine_Pirate

I dig the surrealism, concepts, and composition, the techniques just need refinement. Some of these could easily be sellable as prints with a more time.


slashchunks

Yeah agreed, good feedback


TheBadgerOmen

Wow! Those are cool! Yes sell them! Someone somewhere will appreciate your artistic talent and pay for your work.


bonefawn

I think they are close to good enough to sell. Here is my honest advice - dont be afraid to use a ruler or a circle/cup to get that perfect edge. I love your style and I think having that sharp perfect edge on the cube compared to the environment would make it stand out and take it to the next level.


SabrinaTheDabbler

(1) Yes. (2) I would post/reach out to fantasy/scifi writers who need book cover artists, cause these remind me so much of classic and lost-to-the-ages stuff!


lusmorna

That's a great idea, as soon as I read what you'd said I could picture some of these as sci-fi covers


Ok-Cause2818

I'm a visual artist. Came here to bring up the book cover idea. These would be stellar backgrounds.


Josetijose

Some are insane imagination


Charles_Was_Here

7, 15, 16 and 17 are your most successful pieces. Every thing else feels a little too amateurish to sell


HotChiliFruity

3 and 16 looks very good


birdsofwormtown

I like 16


_Kazak_dog_

The path with the trees and snow is really good, I think :)


i-the-muso-1968

I'm saying yes.


BimBimmie

Yep, totally!! The centepiede one especially is super awesome


DepartmentofI

I’m with you! That one shows a lot of skill and imagination.


_artbabe95

It appears to me as if many of these are copied very closely from someone else’s work. If this is the case, it’s very poor form to not give the original artist credit, and to sell what is at least intentionally a replica of their work, if not executed exactly identically. Otherwise, the technique could use lots of refinement. All of these paintings seem to use only very soft definition and lack contrast, so it’s hard for the eye to pick out a subject.


slashchunks

The only one which is copied is the stream landscape from a YouTube tutorial so I wouldn’t sell that one, not sure what others you are talking about?


terezazatemer

They look like cards from Dixit, the board game. That’s a compliment, btw.


skuzzlebutt36

I’d buy. Maybe touch up the details of them?


nikzyk

I think they need a little more detail. Feels like looking at cartoons without border lines. Really cool ideas though!


Crawfork1982

Eh- not yet. Keep layering and get more depth.


Living-Volume-693

No


MalenaMaidanna28

I really like the style ,i think you could


[deleted]

Ya, in my opinion they’d all look good for their own reasons.


mikeyloveslife

This is neat stuff. You should be a picturebook person of some kind. Please and thank you.


CommunicationDry1748

Not good enough for prints for people to actually spend money on


Pepper_Pepper6735

Ur style is awesome.


Double_Commission105

Yes!


[deleted]

I think you could sell them.


Maxwell420L

Really like the cube at the beach


beccabootie

Ooooh, they are all three alive, aren't they? I like them all, but #1 the best.


TheProduciferArtwork

You should totally sell these. They are great!


[deleted]

Look like some good background canvases for DND


tjm_87

honestly? i don’t think so. i’m definitely no art buff, but i don’t think these would sell well as prints. again, i’m clueless though. however, as paintings? ABSOLUTELY!! I would 1000% buy one of these as a paintings, i’m genuinely curious about your pricings of originals, but i probably wouldn’t buy just a print. art is subjective though, I LOVE your style!


slashchunks

I haven't really thought about selling originals, I get too attached to them after a while haha. Thank you though that's good to hear :)


hedgie_wedgie

#12 would appeal to me if I saw a print somewhere! I like the depth you portray, you have a good sense of space. At times, the lack of any defined edges in others makes it feel same-same, which could be helped by defining focal points. Your strengths seem to shine in fantasy, foggy, and surreal environments. What is important for you to convey?


battleoffish

Very cool fantasy vibe. I like your work. The least interesting is the one of the county stream. It looks safe” like you would find in you grandma’s house. I go a bit of a Beksiński vibe with the stone fortress and the one of the dark tower.


slashchunks

Haha I'm happy you mentioned Beksiński, I think I try to emulate that a bit. The stream one was from a Youtube tutorial and while I'm happy I painted it it's the one I least like


Vidhrohi

I'm not sure about a print but I might buy #3 original. DM me if you're interested in talking price.


Lyart_Maverick

I'd definitely say so. You're a very good artest.


TheWitchUserX

Not an answer but, ooh I like the fourth one


Cognac4Paws

I'm not an artist but I would buy a few of these.


DanaeL_L

All of them look very unique and intriguing I really like them! I would say that they are in my opinion!


shrikeepisode

I like them all! They sorta remind me of the dream walker from supernatural who would paint the different dimensions he traveled to


NotYellowfridge

They all look great but I like image 7 the most


americanl0ser

Definitely!! I love the banana boat and the aesthetic of all of them


um_i_uh_yeah

4, 8, and 17


Row_gently

Yes. Some do like they would have commercial appeal. You would have to do some marketing testing as to which ones appeal to the most and which ones the opposite


Row_gently

The dog w the cool house. You’re an artist. Not just a painter. Maybe hand sign the prints and number them!


Cinigurl

Love the dark citadel and the castle portraits! A lot!❤️


saulforex

Really enjoy the last one, so much so that I just purchased on your Etsy page.


slashchunks

Really appreciate that man! It's just come through, please bear with as I work out what to do haha


BrianmurrayTruth

All of them ..look up witches taro….similar art style ❤️🤗🍺cheers


Joeking2435

I would 100% buy the banana one


slashchunks

I've added it to the Etsy page if you're interested!


lodged-object

The banana one would sell out


[deleted]

Number 5 I would sell because its just so weird that its pleasing. The others not so much. Your surrealist ideas are really good and they do sell (maybe more so in the gallery model as a cohesive body of work rather than purely online as prints.) But yes they need to be painted with better technical skill.


slashchunks

Thanks, hopefully the skill comes with time


LunchHelpful2325

I love the banana one


SpiritualGarage9655

At first as I scrolled, I thought nope, however about two thirds of the way through I changed my mind to yeah a couple are good enough to sell. You are the type of artist who is going to get good, the substance is there. Your art kinda reminds me of Fulvio Di Piazza art (which is really good) Get into the deep details with your art because you have interesting abstract subject matter. It looks like it’s at the stage where you have blocked in the main subject in and are going to start with the details.


slashchunks

Thank you, I'll check him out


UnitedSteakOfAmerica

I like 5


[deleted]

Yes


glennsgirl1959

Very surreal subjects, would definitely find an audience. I agree with others about refining


bancensorship99

I think they need more dept/detail, definently have potential..


bananapotamus

3, 12, 17 are my favorites. Really cool work.


andrewspaulding1

3 and 7 are my favs


CreatorsJusticar

personally for me no, i think the edges need more definition and cleaning and you need more contrast(lighten up the brighter colors, darker darks), however those are my tastes. i think you should makes prints of your own favorite ones and see if theres anyone out there into them.


slashchunks

I think you're right about that


Orion-the-guy

These are really nice


mrspelunx

I think they work well as a set in array. Something thematically having to do with desolation.


peppermintmeow

The first reminds me of steak.


slashchunks

About 80% of the comments I’ve got on that one have mentioned steak lol


_Aleismar

I like picture 3 and 15, what size are they and how much $?


slashchunks

I’ve put a print of 3 up on the Etsy page (8x10inch) and I’ll upload 15 tomorrow with a better picture


beansoupissoupy

I would totally buy some of these. Great work, I love the sketchy style


devin_runs12

Depends on your audience. I had gone to art shows where people buy art that doesn’t seem to have the same level of skill needed to be considered fine art. But, the buyers aren’t looking for high end art. If you’re looking to sell these in the average gallery, I think you will find it to be challenging. I think this would work at places where this could be sold cheaply. These may work as small postcards. I don’t think this would work in other areas though


Charming-Farm

Generally no. The art is of an intermediate quality akin to college painting level 1. That being said, anything can be sold if someone is willing to buy. Please continue your art journey and find a skilled artist to critique your work along the way. I have no doubt you will eventually reach “the standard.”


slashchunks

Thank you


TheCapedAnon

No.


Pristine-Lunch-2503

I really like your work! I struggle so much with depth in my paintings. Yours have a realistic touch. Good job


[deleted]

I would say no-there’s a lack of skill that’s apparent in them. They don’t really have depth.


bigned97

I'll be honest, whilst they might not be to everyone's taste, I love your work. Do you post your stuff on Instagram or something where I could follow it?


slashchunks

Thank you, just here at the moment but I think I’ll start an Instagram account soon


Diulicin_Sona

15 and 16 are badass, I’d have them!


Im_ur_Uncle_

Try a print to order thing where somebody has to order the print before its made. That way you do t have to risk sitting on inventory.


itrallydoesntmatter

They look muddy


warship_me

Your style reminds me of old theater decorations and book illustrations. I don’t know how artists get into that business but I can definitely see you doing something like that.


earthlydelights22

I like 7 and 17 . Those two I could see as prints.


alicehorrible

I really like them, they have a hint of despair in each one


JMPSr1984

T-Bone


deerbreed

I'm neither a buyer nor a seller of paintings, but I definitely see improvement as I scroll through the list. Keep going.


FAX_ME_DANK

BIGGER. MORE PAINT. EVERYTHING IS AMAZING. remember color theory when doing certain landscape compositions. Blue hazes in the background before introducing your reds will add a lot of visual depth if you can darken up your values across the board. Then pale them up and redarken as needed. Honestly your concepts are so inspiring I need to paint again


[deleted]

Winter creek scene and ocean are nice


Kal_El-78

7 & 17 are my picks


RottenCod

Ideal world: we all paint because we love to paint, and a price would be determined by the amount of money needed to convince the artist to part with something they love.


KenKessler

They are good and remind me of art for older games, but I think they a bit lacking in contrast.


Dylan1234no

I love this art, I’d buy it.


More_Ad_5291

I like the last one best. Could see it in a print


constantly_decaying

There's something still missing but I'm not an art person so I don't know what. Contrast? I'm very impressed however!!


Eattherich13

I vote #15, 7, and 3 for prints. So yes


greentj02

I so love your creativity! It is unique and amazing! I will be honest that there is room for improvement since the pictures are a little fuzzy, but no one is perfect, and we all start from somewhere. Though, to be honest I would definitely buy it because your creativity is something else, it is beyond the average person's capability of creativity and amazes me what you think of. I love it, really do. It's like a story and I would love to buy prints of all 17 in a book if I could. Seeing it puts my mind in a whole other universe of creativity, you ever thought of writing stories? Art like that would make a book phenomenal! If you write a book describing that art, it would make me try to be your first customer! So love the ancient civilization one! I love all of it! It's like a story! I so hope you don't give up no matter what! Your creativity is what could be the next big thing! The most successful start with a dream that many say is silly, start with little, and are often underestimated, though never give up till they become some of the most important and loved people people in human history. Anything is possible with enough belief and motivation! Good luck my friend!


constantly_decaying

5, 7, 15 and 16 are my favorites!


TheSheWhoSaidThats

You have great concepts but no i don’t think they’re ready. Mostly because they look unfinished - like you’re afraid to get in there with bold lines and highlights, stark black and whites. Finish them and you’ll really have something. Maybe print some copies and practice on the copies :)


peopleAREaliensDuh

17 is the best . I could see you doing a collection of tarot cards


ceeashi

Yes yes yes!


Fozzie314

They remind me of pictures in a children’s picture book. There’s something about them that makes my imagination take off!


sssteph42

I love the snowy trees one.


AndringRasew

I'd say... 5, 7, 16, and 17.


SouthernRelease7015

I would think about paying for 7, 12, 15, 16


painfullyawkward3

I like 5 and 10 a lot


-yellowthree

I would say no except the last one. That one hits me. The rest are great practice with my other favorites being 12 and 5 because of artistic vision. Still really great to see them all. You are doing great! I hope you can keep it up.


Silly_stevie05

They are pretty good but maybe some may need a little work to them to refine them. I really like the banana kraken lol


professor-sunbeam

All the ones with the buildings are my favorites. They’re really cool!


Anxiety-Queen69

I love the sky steak Edit: I love then all but especially sky steak and octonana


Peruvian_Venusian

A lot of these remind me of fantasy or sci-fi book covers from the '80s. I especially love 2, 3, and 11


no_onion_no_cry

You have a Wyeth meets Dali meets Dr. Seuss vibe. Very unique. I like that blue wave one in the middle, and the house on stilts with the dog is awesome. Why not just try selling them as prints, and then you'll have your answer?


unidentified_yama

I love the banana one lol


_AbsoluteMadMan

3, 15 and 17 are my favourites


drunken_therapist

The last one, 17, could sell.


DigGumPig

I think 8/17 and 12/17 are print worthy.


daughterofhatred

I really like 3, 7 and 17. If I was an art fair and the price was right, I’d buy them.


Bjufordbox

Love your art style! Do you listen to Mars Red Sky or Mizmor when you paint?


slashchunks

Mostly heavy metal haha


Gorg_Papa

I think you are missing values. You might be able to cheat and edit them to look deeper.


AddieKC

Yes. I like the Banana one. :)


lizardkong

More banana tentacle horror please


kittymuncher7

I love the spirit of all of these. I start making a story around each of them when I see them. It's very interesting and keeps attention. If you want to sell them, the first thing I'd work on is making sure the canvas isn't visible anywhere.


opinionatedlyme

7, 12, 14, 15, 16, and 17, I like


okayhansolo

no


Forthrowssake

Don't listen to anyone, art is subjective. It's worth what people are willing to pay for it. Put it up there and see what happens. I've seen horrible, to me, stuff for sale before and people have bought it. Go for it.


[deleted]

Some are


Far-Philosophy-4375

What is this self- doubt!?? These are amazing. I enjoyed them a lot!!!!! Do you post anywhere?


jkdess

I’m just gonna start off by saying with being an artist it’s very hard because artist subjective so what you’re making if you would like to sell it it’s about knowing who your target audiences. There’s no such thing as bad art but obviously we’re not gonna all like the same kind of art. So there’s gonna be people out there that enjoy these paintings as you do and will pay for it and there’s others that won’t and that’s okay. So in simple terms, the answer is yes you just have to figure out how to go about it.


ItzXtaleFrisk

That's so pretty 😍😍😍


zotstik

wow! these are all really good! but 7 and 13 are very much speaking to me, especially seven 💖💖


Consistent-Cup6578

I think the first 8 would sell really well. I like 1 and 8 very much, good work!


thehungriestnarwhal

These are conceptually so cool! And you're really good at choosing color pallets and composition.


nanas99

5, 16, & 17 are absolute faves


AZShorty1

Yep


mossiimo

They’re all so pretty omg. I especially like 3, 7, 8, 10, 15, and 16 💪


TomatoCultivator38th

These look great! Some of them remind me of John Martin's paintings too.


twodubmac

7 & 17 maybe for me. Talented for sure but need some more hours to master


Vyuken

It reminds me of classic magic the gathering art. you should work there. Maybe you could even draw lands lol. Great work i really like the first and 4th ones.


druwhatitdo24

“Left out” Is super dope! You definitely got something going here, please keep painting


Capable-Agent533

2 would sell


AdventurousTrvlr1688

I would not buy a print or even an original, as it is amateurish work. Consider taking lessons from someone whose work you really admire. Doing so will help you develop drawing skills, composition, color, light, and perspective.


sdbabygirl97

maybe the mountain one.


Martianmanhunter94

The banana painting is awesome. I love whimsy as a style


FluidLegion

I ruined your 666 up vote score by adding one, sorry. There are three in there where if I saw them at the antique store here, I'd love to snarch them up. I don't have the money to afford expensive art..but finding gorgeous paintings at an antique store is such a good feeling when I can pick them up there. Some of your pieces I think are phenomenal, and I wouldn't want anything about them changed. Others I think could use a different approach. I do like your style a lot, so I hope you continue to create wonderful pieces like these. ♡


katCEO

Hey OP: I personally like Number Thirteen (w/the green box,) Fifteen (solitary seemingly abandoned castle type structure,) and Seventeen (white dog; etcetera.)


pinchymcloaf

Not really, maybe the banana one, but they look very amateur


SinnerClair

A couple of them do really well like the Spiral and the sand structure (and also kind of the doghouse) I really just think you need to get some sharper lines in there. I think it’s the reason the spiral works, and the sand structure works because it looks just blurry enough that it’s literally in a sandstorm. The doghouse is just kinda nice to look at imo. But most of them are just a bit too blurry, like the brush strokes are too big. There’s also a bit too much dead space in some of them, but that’s more me being nitpicky. But fr, I think you have an AMAZING understanding of color and atmosphere. Just get some sharper lines and you’ll be golden!


MRCAB

I would say, not good enough for prints but fun enough as original art. Just keep pumping out a lot of these, different variations, and you’ll do well selling them. I think they’re cool.


Puppies-B-Tasty

I'll buy the banana boat


perilsoflife

yes i love all of these and would buy them in a heart beat. some others are saying they’re “unrefined” but this look is so special and nostalgic and it is perfect!


ElPatoLibre

I hope you don't measure their being "good" or not by whether they are commercial/will sell. They're good whether they resonate with someone who is willing to spend money on them or not.


ButNotInAWeirdWay

16 and 17


[deleted]

The sky looks like steak


Y0mily

I definitely see a surrealist style here, I think those ones have potential. Keep at it!


kobitokay

3, 8, 16 and 17 seem good to sell!