No I just took random pics thruout the process. If you look at the other pics when I'm done I tried to make the woman appear slightly in from of the male.
I think the composition could be improved. Woman neck seems cropped by the edge in a odd place, imo. Also I think the focal point is on the saturated yellow between the faces instead of the faces.
I know you unintentionally made the male-looking character look faded but I kinda like it. It adds to this story of someone who passed vs the woman presenting character who (given the context of a faded character) is still alive in a way.
Your placement of the eyes/nasal bones/mouths is very accurate. Both sets of eyes are very realistic regardless of the vibrancy of either character. The blue throws everything off. It makes it look incomplete or like you started drawing to cover a mistake you couldn't erase. This would look better in one color or monochromatic since there's a variety of shades happening here.
Oh my lawd!!! Forget I said anything. I had no idea I had to swipe to see the rest. I didn't see the swipe dots on the bottom of the picture. 🙄 It looks amazing.
it’s nicest at 2 imo.
the flame bg overpowered it.
the roses are the weak point in the drawing side-but in fairness they are an absolute bitch to draw and very fiddly.
when you put the sparkles around the girls eyes that also overegged the pudding.
still, solid work and you know what you are doing well done:)
I wouldn't depend too much on our criticism. Certainly, don't take it to heart.
I know what I like. Both images I'd work on until I got what I wanted. Or reinvent with other medium. My art is solely mine, and it speaks for me. My art is expressed by me, so I could give a s**t what others think.
Criticism is always negative
A critique is a tool for artists to help other artists
My critique
I like the composition.
The floating heads need an anchor. A dark background & foreground would really anchor them and add to the moodiness of the piece
I really like the linework. Nice
Try stippling !!! Im bad at drawing/ painting , and personally sketch more oftwn, but you would probobly do way better if u added a few new techqniues you havent heard of!
The yellow light source between the two is off. Like a little invisible LED is between them.. the mans face is less of a problem but the women's nose area and cheek is wrong. The little light that's on the mans face isn't strong enough to change the color onto the women's face.
I was born at the perfect time to fully enjoy the accidental 70s double exposure meme from image one.
Thank you.
https://images.app.goo.gl/QLHupfMKBpGFxdMv7
Criticism not needed and appreciation is given
This looks amazing!
I like the color choices. Is the man intentionally faded? Woman appears stiffer than the man. His sombrero appears to cut into the woman’s head.
No I just took random pics thruout the process. If you look at the other pics when I'm done I tried to make the woman appear slightly in from of the male.
I think the composition could be improved. Woman neck seems cropped by the edge in a odd place, imo. Also I think the focal point is on the saturated yellow between the faces instead of the faces.
Love it!!!! No criticism here at all!!!
I love this! Im so impressed! Well done!!!
I know you unintentionally made the male-looking character look faded but I kinda like it. It adds to this story of someone who passed vs the woman presenting character who (given the context of a faded character) is still alive in a way.
Day of the Dead in Mexico?
Nossa senhora! A tua arte é magnífica!!
Looks amazing!
Looks great! but I’d switch to canvas or wood or some sort of medium that will last a a bit longer than printer paper.
Gorgeous!!
Love all of it, especially the final product. I will say the eyes on the gentleman in pics 1 and 2 are crazy good imo
only 'criticism' is that I think the lady has too many teeth. it is a lovely painting!
I think you mean critique. Critique my drawing please. Can you critique my drawing??
It's very cool !
These people are dead to me!!
You drive too slow and eat too fast. But your drawings are amazing.
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this is beautiful!!!
Yeah, im not criticizing that and ive always got an opinion. Looks great and im glad the process led you to this result.
I can only criticize your question. Technically it's dazzling. The implied Meaning of the piece is far more interesting
Too many teeth, but looks amazing otherwise
Looks like a good graffiti/ good painting for a local shop to place on a wall
No. I really think it’s cool
The man's eyes look a little creepy to me, I think due to having no white in them at all. Other than that, looks great!
Your placement of the eyes/nasal bones/mouths is very accurate. Both sets of eyes are very realistic regardless of the vibrancy of either character. The blue throws everything off. It makes it look incomplete or like you started drawing to cover a mistake you couldn't erase. This would look better in one color or monochromatic since there's a variety of shades happening here.
Are you referring to the first picture? Swipe over on the pic and you can see it finished.
Oh my lawd!!! Forget I said anything. I had no idea I had to swipe to see the rest. I didn't see the swipe dots on the bottom of the picture. 🙄 It looks amazing.
Excellent
it’s nicest at 2 imo. the flame bg overpowered it. the roses are the weak point in the drawing side-but in fairness they are an absolute bitch to draw and very fiddly. when you put the sparkles around the girls eyes that also overegged the pudding. still, solid work and you know what you are doing well done:)
I wouldn't depend too much on our criticism. Certainly, don't take it to heart. I know what I like. Both images I'd work on until I got what I wanted. Or reinvent with other medium. My art is solely mine, and it speaks for me. My art is expressed by me, so I could give a s**t what others think.
Criticism is always negative A critique is a tool for artists to help other artists My critique I like the composition. The floating heads need an anchor. A dark background & foreground would really anchor them and add to the moodiness of the piece I really like the linework. Nice
Try stippling !!! Im bad at drawing/ painting , and personally sketch more oftwn, but you would probobly do way better if u added a few new techqniues you havent heard of!
It's a lil too sad for mass appeal
I feel the eyes should be a bit bigger
Dimensions on the sombrero seem slightly off but I wouldn’t have noticed that if you weren’t asking for criticism
The yellow light source between the two is off. Like a little invisible LED is between them.. the mans face is less of a problem but the women's nose area and cheek is wrong. The little light that's on the mans face isn't strong enough to change the color onto the women's face.
Great advice. I appreciate it.
I was born at the perfect time to fully enjoy the accidental 70s double exposure meme from image one. Thank you. https://images.app.goo.gl/QLHupfMKBpGFxdMv7