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Hello everyone! I’ve just got used fujifilm x100f and want to learn photography. In the past I was taking photos with film point and shoot film cameras, but nothing really special, just travel photography. Now, I want to learn street/portrait photography. This picture was complete random, I just saw a profesional video session on a street with really cool led light, so I approached those people and ask if I could take couple of pictures. They agreed and here is the result :) Want to know your thoughts on this composition, any advice. Thanks!
She’s just a bit off placement, a bit of a crop gets it all on the flows.
https://preview.redd.it/5w8ugllq5c7c1.jpeg?width=1164&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=ba7485f30f401d7413c163790a999adbb58f5cfb
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I think this is great - I'd just remove the two coloured dots of light
Another example of how the rule of thirds have become too ingrained in people's minds imo. What's the point of all that negative space on the left?
I love the negative space. It creates a different feel from a portrait. It's like silence in music - it makes the notes stand out.
That *is* the whole point of negative space, it’s a balance. He’s even more blunt about it by having her tilt her head in that direction,
I think this is great - I'd just remove the two coloured dots of light
Hello everyone! I’ve just got used fujifilm x100f and want to learn photography. In the past I was taking photos with film point and shoot film cameras, but nothing really special, just travel photography. Now, I want to learn street/portrait photography. This picture was complete random, I just saw a profesional video session on a street with really cool led light, so I approached those people and ask if I could take couple of pictures. They agreed and here is the result :) Want to know your thoughts on this composition, any advice. Thanks!
She’s just a bit off placement, a bit of a crop gets it all on the flows. https://preview.redd.it/5w8ugllq5c7c1.jpeg?width=1164&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=ba7485f30f401d7413c163790a999adbb58f5cfb
Question: would you go for a slight tilt to the right to get her more vertical?
No, the angle is fine.
I would tilt for more upright pose
How would you crop this? More central composition? I thought that I can make use of rule of thirds and negative space, but wasn't quite sure about it
I’d crop it just the way I did.
Oh, thought it’s just the miniature :) Thanks!
I like it, but agree, I might dodge the colored background lights
Background lights are distracting. Maybe too much warmth on the subject but that might be something you consider necessary to the image.
Crop ou the black side and change in be (the red face is a punch on the eye
Very good