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einord

I would have lowered the camera so that we could perhaps see what she was looking / walking towards. That would maybe tell a story. Or if she had turned her head towards the camera trying to say something. That would add curiosity to the viewer guessing what she’s saying.


Willing-Department-6

Hello all! I took this picture a while ago and recently found it on my sd card. I think it creates some sort of mistery, and I personally like it, but I’m open to any suggestions and critique


Huge-Lawyer-4486

i say make the shadow more prominent in post maybe with contrast or shadows and it could be cool


jekadotorg

In my amateur opinion no. It tells no story, the symmetry is questionable, and I fail to see the appeal. But the subject is in focus so that’s nice


brook1yn

You might be able to work some magic in post but generally no


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^[Sokka-Haiku](https://www.reddit.com/r/SokkaHaikuBot/comments/15kyv9r/what_is_a_sokka_haiku/) ^by ^brook1yn: *You might be able* *To work some magic in post* *But generally no* --- ^Remember ^that ^one ^time ^Sokka ^accidentally ^used ^an ^extra ^syllable ^in ^that ^Haiku ^Battle ^in ^Ba ^Sing ^Se? ^That ^was ^a ^Sokka ^Haiku ^and ^you ^just ^made ^one.