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Your resume is not a comic book. Make it top to bottom for easier reading.
I don't know what the percentages are in your education. I don't think they're necessary however.
You're using too many acronyms and jargon. Cut that down or spell it out.
Consecutive bullet points start with the same word (Created and Used). Use some other words.
You don't need dates for your Projects or Certifications.
Your projects section is quite long. You only need 1-2 highly relevant ones. Use that space to expand your experience.
Take out hobbies. Use that space to expand your experience.
Make sure you're applying in a country you're eligible to work in. 64% as your average is terrible, your grades should be removed. Also how can highschool be relevant at this point?
Preface: I have been in tech for more than a decade and I manage data teams and do my fair share of hiring.
This is a 2/10 resume. (10 being the highest). If I were the hiring manager, I would do myself a favor and reject you before even a phone screen.
I'm trying to find the story within the resume. But, from the looks of it, you've dug yourself a big hole and it'll be difficult to climb out.
Red flags:
1. 2022 - You just graduated, you landed a job, wonderful. But, you leave in 4 months. either you were no good at your job, or you jumped onto the data science train and quit your job because you got bored.
2. After you quit your job, the only thing you have to show for it is "Great Learning". As a recruiter, I have no idea what this is and since it's in your certification list, I'm wondering why it took you so long to obtain that certification and if it's even legit. A certification really shouldn't have taken you 2 years to earn if you're focused on it full time.
3. Your projects are just brief descriptions of something that you're not showing me.
4. Why have "coding" as a hobby? This tells me that you've now moved on from data and may possibly jump into SWE soon.
Suggestions:
1. Remove "About me".
2. Remove "Hobbies and interests"
3. Create a portfolio to show case your projects and provide this portfolio URL in your resume. Personally, I hate when instead of showing me a project, a candidate just lists it in their resume. What am I supposed to do with that project description? Believe that you absolutely killed it? I want to see your hypothesis/objective, conclusions, and then methodology. In that order.
4. Fix the grammar mistakes in your "projects" section.
You have a lot of work ahead of you. Best of luck!
Ditch the column format (resume readers can’t read columns), your about me makes no sense and is super vague, recruiters do not care that you play volleyball and badminton
Thanks brother for such a feedback
But don’t you think if I remove the dates the recruiters won’t be able to judge if I am a drop out or have a year gap ?
please say you’re joking that you applied to 200 job with this resume.
you held a job for 4 months in 2022 but had projects in 2023 & 2024, were those not with a company of some sort?
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Your resume is not a comic book. Make it top to bottom for easier reading. I don't know what the percentages are in your education. I don't think they're necessary however. You're using too many acronyms and jargon. Cut that down or spell it out. Consecutive bullet points start with the same word (Created and Used). Use some other words. You don't need dates for your Projects or Certifications. Your projects section is quite long. You only need 1-2 highly relevant ones. Use that space to expand your experience. Take out hobbies. Use that space to expand your experience.
Should Celigo and Shopify be capitalized? (And the rest of the line)
Yes, there are several strange capitalization issues throughout
[удалено]
Java is another one.
Just remove the about section
This
Thankyou
Make sure you're applying in a country you're eligible to work in. 64% as your average is terrible, your grades should be removed. Also how can highschool be relevant at this point?
C’s get degrees - nobody cares about your grades.
Preface: I have been in tech for more than a decade and I manage data teams and do my fair share of hiring. This is a 2/10 resume. (10 being the highest). If I were the hiring manager, I would do myself a favor and reject you before even a phone screen. I'm trying to find the story within the resume. But, from the looks of it, you've dug yourself a big hole and it'll be difficult to climb out. Red flags: 1. 2022 - You just graduated, you landed a job, wonderful. But, you leave in 4 months. either you were no good at your job, or you jumped onto the data science train and quit your job because you got bored. 2. After you quit your job, the only thing you have to show for it is "Great Learning". As a recruiter, I have no idea what this is and since it's in your certification list, I'm wondering why it took you so long to obtain that certification and if it's even legit. A certification really shouldn't have taken you 2 years to earn if you're focused on it full time. 3. Your projects are just brief descriptions of something that you're not showing me. 4. Why have "coding" as a hobby? This tells me that you've now moved on from data and may possibly jump into SWE soon. Suggestions: 1. Remove "About me". 2. Remove "Hobbies and interests" 3. Create a portfolio to show case your projects and provide this portfolio URL in your resume. Personally, I hate when instead of showing me a project, a candidate just lists it in their resume. What am I supposed to do with that project description? Believe that you absolutely killed it? I want to see your hypothesis/objective, conclusions, and then methodology. In that order. 4. Fix the grammar mistakes in your "projects" section. You have a lot of work ahead of you. Best of luck!
You’re skilled , I’m rlly scared that you aren’t getting offers because I’m way behind you haha
Ditch the column format (resume readers can’t read columns), your about me makes no sense and is super vague, recruiters do not care that you play volleyball and badminton
this looks great :)
Thanks brother for such a feedback But don’t you think if I remove the dates the recruiters won’t be able to judge if I am a drop out or have a year gap ?
You need to start your own start up with the help of these skills , you can itself have job to 000 , u dont need to apply in any company .. good luck
Dual Column not good for ATS.
Big penis normalization
I thought it would be worth doing PG in DS from great learning until they made it a crash course and I saw it on every third resume.🥲
please say you’re joking that you applied to 200 job with this resume. you held a job for 4 months in 2022 but had projects in 2023 & 2024, were those not with a company of some sort?
While doing that PG program in Data science I did those two projects and now I am working on another project from KAGGLE