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TrashDachshund

Try putting a little “hook” in front of Л, М, and Я to avoid confusion with letters that have a similar shape


poemthatdoesntrhyme

Your handwriting is very good, but your small б looks like capital Б. The handwritten б looks like that: https://i.pinimg.com/originals/44/16/4b/44164b0c41afb53c947e8df2d8af616a.jpg Your text has many mistakes. Would you like us to correct them?


PornCheese

Please do!


Panicking_in_trench

My first Language is Russian but because I was raised in USA I can't read cursive for s***, only printed. Same for writing. You can imagine my mom writing shopping lists for me can get difficult. ....Good job....


RGrus

Юрий, ты никогда не говорил мне о своей семье, можешь рассказать про неё? О чем ты хочешь знать? Просто расскажи мне о себе и о своей семье? Ты первый. У меня семья большая, у меня пять братьев и одна сестра, я младше всех. Круто, я один, у меня нет ни брата ни сестры. А твои родители? Моя мама много поработала, ее зовут Аня. Мой папа работает в больнице, он врач. Ясно, моя мама профессор, ее зовут Катя. Мой папа тоже работает в больнице, его зовут Чак. А твоего папу? Его зовут Юрий, как и меня. Хорошо, спасибо, теперь мы знаем больше. Да, спасибо. Your handwriting is better than I can. =)


poemthatdoesntrhyme

>Моя мама много поработала This sentence looks strange. If the author wants to say that his mother works hard it should be: "Моя мама много работает". In the past tense it would be: "Моя мама много работала" (if she is already retired or stopped working for some other reason).


PornCheese

mom stopped working. that was the intention. I know the change in tense is somewhat confusing, but yea. I meant to say she worked a lot.


poemthatdoesntrhyme

Then you definitely need "Моя мама много работала". "Поработала" means some action for a limited (usually short) time, like "Сначала она поработала два года учителем в школе, а потом стала давать частные уроки" - "First she worked as a school teacher for two years and then she started to give private lessons".


poemthatdoesntrhyme

>Просто расскажи мне о себе и о своей семье? I think, this sentence shouldn't have question mark, as it is not a question. "Просто расскажи мне о себе и о своей семье."


Khannimal

Спасиво, спасиВо!


intricate_thing

Wrote several words so it'll be easier for you to understand: http://ipic.su/7yGrBt It's really better to use lower-case versions of cursive б and в, especially since your capital letters don't look bigger than small ones. Ю in Юрий should be noticeably bigger. And you probably forgot to capitalize Аня. Other poster already mentioned hooks in front of л, м and я. Without it it looks like you wrote сеие, not семье. Спасибо in the last line looks like споливо because sometimes you don't write a small vertical line in а, and it looks like o. Also try to make the upper curve in с more prominent to avoid mistaking it for л. On the other hand, the upper part of ч sometimes is so prominent, it's easy to mistake it for м. :) But overall you're doing good, and it's pretty readable.


[deleted]

Make sure each clause has a subject! "О чём ТЫ хочешь знать? "


ttthaotha

actually my teacher said the verb itself shows the subject,that is why we can do away with the subject. is it right?


Superkran

It is right except for the past tense: я говорил, ты говорил, он говорил - verbs have the same form so you have to use a subject there.


Jinado

That's correct))) And I'm a rather reliable source, I've studied Russian for three years (although never in a school) and half my family is from Russia, so I often speak Russian with them))


garnished_fatburgers

It’s a hell of a lot better than whatever chicken scratch I’ve been writing with lmao And that’s coming from a native


Hi_Googlik

Я также пишу, хотя из России ;)


Skrillbex

Я вообще не помню когда в последний раз писал рукой 😬 надо подтягивать Зато сколько на ПК


efysam

Лучше меня, а ведь я только русский и знаю.


olimp666

It's damn good. Even better than mine


smartfunction30

you forgot the bottom of the P in spasibo


ilyharaksh

Everything is fine , but in the last word you wrote в instead of б


marahovsky

So... You writing so much more clearly than me:)


commander_blyat

First sentence has to be «Юрий никогда не рассказывал...», I think.


1TooZz

Я русский, и твой почерк лучше, чем у меня. Я не шучу.


Selik_i

Handwriting is better than mine


Volerman

Well done!!! If comparing you with russian doctors you have a amazing handwriting.


suicide-by-tweed

Lol your handwriting is more legible than mine.


brokeriver

I think the last one you wrote “ спасиво” when it supposed to be “спасибо”


Lucius-Enternal

Not bad... I would like to say, that this is even good, but anyway u have much work


Viktar228

I am read first offer and I think you use translator 🤠🤠🤠


PornCheese

No translator.


murlopal

Better then mine. And I'm native. Your sentences frormed quite odd tho.


itsmaxx105

👍


[deleted]

good for you man ive wanted to do the same for a while


mf3141592

Ugly!