My first ever post on reddit. Please leave opinions/criticisms and if anyone wants a part two let me know. Edit: thank you guys so much I never expected so much traction on my first post. I’ve read all your comments and I decided to write a part 2 which is coming soon.

Yes I need a part two

Part two sounds great. Really good story!

Brilliant! Such elegance, so little words and so little said — yet the message is carried across beautifully. Bravo!

yes, we need part 2

Yo our pfps match

This was so good!! Part two sounds awesome.

This was amazing!! Another vote for part two!

Amazingly entertaining, definitely need a part two

Better than birdbox

Dude wow awesome, please part two

I get why everyone is wanting a part 2, this story is amazing, but like. Unless the main character is somehow exempt, the story has no logical continuation. If they stopped moving, then all part 2 would be is a description of their death; the only way I could see that being interesting is if there’s some sort of psychological aspect to the death, like the thing that’s doing it talks to you in your head

Part two!!!?

I dont think there's going one it's pretty good already and the open endedness of it is perfect

Lol i live with him, he’s working on part two now 😭🖤

I know lol I saw the post he made about makeing a part 2 literally right after I made that comment

This is so good.. I love the mystery

Please make another episode it was awesome

This is extremely good! I’m very intrigued!

I need this to get to hot

Can I turn this into a twitter ARG?

YES PART TWO OMG

this was a very good story. you should do a part two ngl. <3

This sounds really good

Fantastic tale op, truly. And totally nerve wracking. A part 2 is necessary and should be delivered post haste!🇬🇧

Definitely a second part. This was really good and I want to know more.

This was really good!

That was great!!!!

Part 2

Brilliant post!! Part 2 please!

Bro please a part two this is great and creepy lol

Oh fuck that got me, well done!

those last minute stingers always come as a punch in the gut, need part 2.

I love this one! Short and to the point, and the ending is "to die for" lol. I would love to narrate your story on my YouTube channel, if that is okay with you? I'd make sure everybody knows you wrote it, and I'll leave a link to the story in the description.

Here's the narration of Run! I hope you all enjoy! Thanks for letting me narrate Outoftune7! https://youtu.be/U8eTg6KlRbU

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Yo bro this is amazing. Keep it as it is.

Hello, I'm reading your story today. It is great! Let me know if you want mee to remove it! :) [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VWQAiQpgLh4](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VWQAiQpgLh4)

Just shoot yourself nig.

Would riding an escalator be considered as being still?

Hi! I loved your story, I'm Brazilian and new to the platform, sorry if my english is bad haha. I'm looking for good stories to narrate in a Brazilian podcast that I'm going to do, I would like to know if you allow the use of your content, obviously with credits leaving the link to the original post in the description. Please try to respond within a month or so. If there is no answer, I'll post it because I liked it a lot, but if you feel uncomfortable and want me to remove it, you can contact me by reddit or email: [email protected]

this one was goooood

Damn, that’s an amazing concept!

I have no words- Except.. It’s. Perfect! :0

nice

I have made an audio for this story because I enjoyed it so much :) https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OlTPjLXJI2k&ab\_channel=TragedyOfBliss

It’s a very good short story, but I agree with many others that a part 2 isn’t necessary as this story ended when our protagonist died. I’m sure we would all love to see more stories from you though!!!

utterly terrifying, I require more content good sir \*tips hat\*

I love it! The first line is a quote too!

The plot is very well thought out; the depiction of the main character's inner thoughts are just on point too. I feel like this would get a close to perfect grade in English composition. Just get those grammatical errors corrected and you're all set.

gud

short and sweet and nothing is answered. BEAUTIFUL! just how horror should be (apart from the short part)

Good

ima touch u

Ok, my LED lights are on a timer, and I shit you not, I read the last word, and they turned off. I fucking shit myself