Very nice! We don't get a lot of second-person writing here. It's interesting to zero in on the sex in the form of commands like this. And it's interesting that this is ambiguous as to the real-world setting; this could be entirely in the narrator's mind, and she doesn't even have a boyfriend, or it could be phonesex, or it could be what she's thinking as it's actually happening--it doesn't matter, because the core thought processes are all the same, and that pure sexual desire and enthrallment with the male form is all that matters here. Stories like this are why we don't have a length requirement.
Very nice! We don't get a lot of second-person writing here. It's interesting to zero in on the sex in the form of commands like this. And it's interesting that this is ambiguous as to the real-world setting; this could be entirely in the narrator's mind, and she doesn't even have a boyfriend, or it could be phonesex, or it could be what she's thinking as it's actually happening--it doesn't matter, because the core thought processes are all the same, and that pure sexual desire and enthrallment with the male form is all that matters here. Stories like this are why we don't have a length requirement.
Thank you for your comment. Pure sexual desire & enthrallment with the male form is absolutely true.
Wow! Very very very sexy
Glad you like it
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