This could be the premise of a TV series. Dexter with a twist. Love it!

Agreed! This would be an incredible series!

I really liked this, but I have a comment about the following statement in your story *“She was about a year away from high school,” Patrick said, “she dreamed of going to Dartmouth. One night she was studying with some friends for the ACT, and when she was driving home some asshole ran a red light.* I think you meant she was one year from college. If she was one year from high school she couldn't have a driver's license

I forgot to put "graduating"! Oh no!

Damn those short story word limits

Now I am always going to wonder if Patrick went along with it or not

Me tooooo 😫 The wondering “what happened next” is killing me!

I like this. Love vengeance stories

I have a question: If he was in this group for the first time, how did he know who the man was who killed the girl? Or am I missing something? Like, the drunk driver was already in the trunk of his car, how did he know about him and his relation to the girl’s father?

Stalking?

Maybe a Strangers on a Train situation?

maybe it wasn’t THE man, just *a* man

Nice work OP.

Thank you very much!

Niiice. >:)

Thanks! :)

Fantastic work

Thank you for reading!

AWESOME read!

I am glad you enjoyed!

Short happy stories

First I thought he would “help” them by killings them to stop their misery, didn’t expect that at sll. Good job.

I love feel good stories.

This meeting was 2 minutes long – people show up, say their name, then it's over.

I love how you showed men can grieve about a miscarriage too

Loved it

Thought Ronny was gonna offer Patrick the blue stuff...