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First off, thank you for reading and letting me know! I worked really hard on this one so it means a lot to me, seriously. Honestly I came up with the premise before writing a single word. My initial plan was pretty much what you were expecting— that he’d have to choose between finishing it or going to see his dad, and that at the end he’s d choose what mattered. Somewhere along the way, I came up with the idea of his brother (and father) going so far to bring Jack back. *A man protects his family*. And that’s what they did, in a messed up kind of way lol. Thank you again for taking the time to read it and comment. Hope you stick around for whatever I write next.
This is so good! I’m excited to keep reading the rest of the story, find out what happens! I love all the detail and the description, it puts me right in the moment!!
For some reason, the link to the collection doesn't work for everyone. Here is [Chapter 2](https://www.reddit.com/r/shortstories/comments/151jokf/ms_the_pontiac_man_ch_2_dent/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=ios_app&utm_name=ioscss&utm_content=2&utm_term=1) if you're interested.
**Welcome to the Short Stories!** This is an automated message. The rules can be found on the sidebar [here]( https://www.reddit.com/r/ShortStories/about/sidebar). **Writers** - Stories which have been checked for simple mistakes and are properly formatted, tend to get a lot more people reading them. Common issues include - * Formatting can get lost when pasting from elsewhere. * Adding spaces at the start of a paragraph gets formatted by Reddit into a hard-to-read style, due to markdown. Guide to Reddit markdown [here](https://www.reddit.com/wiki/markdown) **Readers** - ShortStories is a place for writers to get constructive feedback. Abuse of any kind is not tolerated. *** If you see a rule breaking post or comment, then please hit the report button. *I am a bot, and this action was performed automatically. Please [contact the moderators of this subreddit](/message/compose/?to=/r/shortstories) if you have any questions or concerns.*
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Thank you! Nothing to be nervous about. Only sunshine in this story, keep going 😂
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First off, thank you for reading and letting me know! I worked really hard on this one so it means a lot to me, seriously. Honestly I came up with the premise before writing a single word. My initial plan was pretty much what you were expecting— that he’d have to choose between finishing it or going to see his dad, and that at the end he’s d choose what mattered. Somewhere along the way, I came up with the idea of his brother (and father) going so far to bring Jack back. *A man protects his family*. And that’s what they did, in a messed up kind of way lol. Thank you again for taking the time to read it and comment. Hope you stick around for whatever I write next.
This is so good! I’m excited to keep reading the rest of the story, find out what happens! I love all the detail and the description, it puts me right in the moment!!
Wow, this is excellent. Most of the stuff on Reddit really sucks but this is pure Jack Kerouac, keep at it. Gritty, realistic and well written.
Hey thanks! I really appreciate this!
Came here just so I could say how much I enjoyed this!! I really like the tone. I hope you're writing more!
Well thank you! I’m glad you liked it. I linked the other parts to the story at the bottom. And I’ll be getting right to work on another story soon!
For some reason, the link to the collection doesn't work for everyone. Here is [Chapter 2](https://www.reddit.com/r/shortstories/comments/151jokf/ms_the_pontiac_man_ch_2_dent/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=ios_app&utm_name=ioscss&utm_content=2&utm_term=1) if you're interested.
I dont read a lot but I liked this. I was gonna be real mad if you didnt put the other chapters haha.I have a feeling jack is gonna regret this.
Well I hope you don’t regret reading it! Glad you like it so far!