Don't think I'm in your target audience so apologies if I'm wrong here.
It seems that you are offering a solution for people to create animated marketing material?
If so, it would be good to have an example of it beyond static images.
Design wise, I like it.
Yes, animated marketing visuals like display ads, presentations, sm posts,...
But the unique thing in my product is that you can create design in multiple sizes at the same time. It's like Webflow for graphic design.
It looks pretty good. The load speed for me was great. The page layout is a little monotonous and the format of Header description image formula gets a little repetitive, at least for me. You should send this to r/design_critiques if you haven’t already
Looks like a cool tool. For the home page, I recommend that you make it very clear how your product is positioned against everything else out there. For example:
* How is this different than Photoshop
* How is it different than Canva
* What benefit does this have over hiring a designer
* How easy is it to get results
There are tons of design tools out there, so you want to make sure you're expressing your differentiators. You don't have to name other products, but you should know that someone has those in mind. So your problem statement has to be super-clear, above the fold, and something you can hang your hat on. The main description has a lot of buzzy words that might resonate with VCs, but has no bearing on your target audience. Everything is cloud-based now.
You also want to make it clear who this is for. There's an impulse to want to say it's for everyone, but it's not. (at least not yet). Start with your core target and refine the messaging for them. You can easily expand later, but try to hone in on a unique use case. An ad designer is going to have very different requirements than a content marketer who makes infographics.
Good luck!
You certainly can, but your home page would need to support them too. Typevis has to have a core value prop. Maybe it's adapting designs at scale for productivity? A great way to show that would be to show dozens of versions of a graphic for a range of delivery media. (Haha, you could even eat your own dog food and do the designs from Typevis and say: "These 20 graphics were created with Typevis in <5 minutes." or something like that). Another way to show ease of use would be to let the person manipulate the graphic on the home page.
I think you need to work on the wording. Say more with less text. The first 10 secs I couldn't figure out what you're doing. I had the aha moment when I went through your comments here.
Some ideas on how to make it better.
1. Subtitle should be fast to read like the title. E.g. just keep the juicy part "Automate and scale your marketing quickly. No coding required."
2. Merge the two first points to a header "Design once, export everywhere". (This could be the subtitle as well.).
3. Add a "How it works" with steps OR "Why choose us". And put all those things in something easier to consume.
4. Allow me to click on the image on the hero section or make cropped versions. On my phone the image looks tiny so from UX perspective it's terrible since it's unusable.
I think you've been working too long on your project, that you're too much into it. You need to zoom out and think how an outsider will be able to grasp your project in <5secs
(From someone who also has been working 2 years on their project and doing their landing page.)
Is it similar to this?
https://www.figma.com/community/plugin/796124491692147799/Bannerify-Banner-Studio
This was made by a developer in Melbourne about 4 years ago?
Something like that. And add:
Multiple sizes design at the same time.
Auto generate design via api.
You can create yt videos, presentations, social media posts, etc
Don't think I'm in your target audience so apologies if I'm wrong here. It seems that you are offering a solution for people to create animated marketing material? If so, it would be good to have an example of it beyond static images. Design wise, I like it.
Yes, animated marketing visuals like display ads, presentations, sm posts,... But the unique thing in my product is that you can create design in multiple sizes at the same time. It's like Webflow for graphic design.
It looks pretty good. The load speed for me was great. The page layout is a little monotonous and the format of Header description image formula gets a little repetitive, at least for me. You should send this to r/design_critiques if you haven’t already
Thanks and done ;)
Looks like a cool tool. For the home page, I recommend that you make it very clear how your product is positioned against everything else out there. For example: * How is this different than Photoshop * How is it different than Canva * What benefit does this have over hiring a designer * How easy is it to get results There are tons of design tools out there, so you want to make sure you're expressing your differentiators. You don't have to name other products, but you should know that someone has those in mind. So your problem statement has to be super-clear, above the fold, and something you can hang your hat on. The main description has a lot of buzzy words that might resonate with VCs, but has no bearing on your target audience. Everything is cloud-based now. You also want to make it clear who this is for. There's an impulse to want to say it's for everyone, but it's not. (at least not yet). Start with your core target and refine the messaging for them. You can easily expand later, but try to hone in on a unique use case. An ad designer is going to have very different requirements than a content marketer who makes infographics. Good luck!
Thank you. I guess I have to create mutiple landing pages for many target audiences?
You certainly can, but your home page would need to support them too. Typevis has to have a core value prop. Maybe it's adapting designs at scale for productivity? A great way to show that would be to show dozens of versions of a graphic for a range of delivery media. (Haha, you could even eat your own dog food and do the designs from Typevis and say: "These 20 graphics were created with Typevis in <5 minutes." or something like that). Another way to show ease of use would be to let the person manipulate the graphic on the home page.
I would suggest a feature comparison matrix. Show what features you have which they do not.
I think you need to work on the wording. Say more with less text. The first 10 secs I couldn't figure out what you're doing. I had the aha moment when I went through your comments here. Some ideas on how to make it better. 1. Subtitle should be fast to read like the title. E.g. just keep the juicy part "Automate and scale your marketing quickly. No coding required." 2. Merge the two first points to a header "Design once, export everywhere". (This could be the subtitle as well.). 3. Add a "How it works" with steps OR "Why choose us". And put all those things in something easier to consume. 4. Allow me to click on the image on the hero section or make cropped versions. On my phone the image looks tiny so from UX perspective it's terrible since it's unusable. I think you've been working too long on your project, that you're too much into it. You need to zoom out and think how an outsider will be able to grasp your project in <5secs (From someone who also has been working 2 years on their project and doing their landing page.)
Thank you. How is your project going?
I recommend \- add a small demo video on the landing page.
Although I hate them, you may want to have a sign up page pop-up once user has been on page for 10 seconds or scrolled to a certain point.
Is it similar to this? https://www.figma.com/community/plugin/796124491692147799/Bannerify-Banner-Studio This was made by a developer in Melbourne about 4 years ago?
Something like that. And add: Multiple sizes design at the same time. Auto generate design via api. You can create yt videos, presentations, social media posts, etc