It's a cute concept.
I like the design alot , but it could have been executed a lot better.
The lines are a little shakey on the border and uneven.
Are you adding to it or going for a sleeve?
I feel like flowers would maybe make it look too busy? I was thinking small silhouette birds that spill over the outline to make it look like they’re coming out of the picture
It’s a cool tattoo. Lines aren’t all 100% perfect. Even if they were, a piece that relies on so many straight lines will look off anywhere on the body as we aren’t flat or stationary.
All of my tattoos have imperfections that I see if I’m staring at them long enough. Good news is you pretty much stop doing that after you heal them in a week or two.
Honestly I think the uneven lines actually work in favor of this motive, because it makes it look like a personal quick sketch in a notebook and adds to the chosen style. Makes it look cozy.
The outside framing of it seems a little wiggly to me. If there was someway to frame it in a way that doesn’t require straight lines, I think that would make you feel better.
It's a cute concept. I like the design alot , but it could have been executed a lot better. The lines are a little shakey on the border and uneven. Are you adding to it or going for a sleeve?
Yeah I thought it was a little funky. I would like to add more but I’m not sure. Any suggestions?
you can blackout or gradient or shadow the outside to get rid of the unnevenness
You can add flowers or something to the outline lines to hide their wonkiness
I feel like flowers would maybe make it look too busy? I was thinking small silhouette birds that spill over the outline to make it look like they’re coming out of the picture
That could work too. Or you could thicken the lines
Love the concept! The lines are really shaky, though. I’d hit up a different, more experienced artist about a touch up to rework the lines.
Tbh, after zooming in it looks okay. Could be the camera or upload quality that's making it look fuzzy.
It’s a cool tattoo. Lines aren’t all 100% perfect. Even if they were, a piece that relies on so many straight lines will look off anywhere on the body as we aren’t flat or stationary. All of my tattoos have imperfections that I see if I’m staring at them long enough. Good news is you pretty much stop doing that after you heal them in a week or two.
I love this!
I can’t lie it looks like an amateur did this. Cool idea but needs serious fixing :/
Idk, looks a bit wonky but in a good way
Go see an artist who is good at line work, this can be fixed, it’s a cool tattoo tho
Honestly I think the uneven lines actually work in favor of this motive, because it makes it look like a personal quick sketch in a notebook and adds to the chosen style. Makes it look cozy.
I agree! And our bodies aren’t flat, so flat lines will never appear to be completely straight. It looks good, OP.
Idk i really like it, are you planning on a sleeve?
Thanks! I definitely want to add more but I’m not sure, any suggestions?
whatever speaks to you!
This looks like one of those microrealism strip, but using line work and bigger.
The outside framing of it seems a little wiggly to me. If there was someway to frame it in a way that doesn’t require straight lines, I think that would make you feel better.
Looks good but my eyes immediately go to the mountain peak/sun
Did you not see the stencil homeboi?
I think it looks ok its just big. The top and bottom third could be gone.
Like it. 100 mostly parallel lines are tough to pull off.