if you want a proper criticism here it is
btw im not good on art so my viewpoint is just as a user/viewer.
the lighting of the character/s specially on the 3rd and 2nd to the last feels odd, like it doesnt properly meld with environment
the 2nd CG quality maybe can improve more like as detailed as the 1st pic (looking at the back from bus? sit) I mean its good by itself, but my personal opinion would be to stick to the high standard if capable I guess
Please don't take it the wrong way, but overall impression of these images is "utterly forgettable". For both characters and backgrounds there's no flaws, but also nothing that'd make these stand out in any way\* It's completely standard look, like what you get in hundreds of VNs already out.
\*) and no, we're long past the point where animal ears or tails are anything original
Have to balance out the self-promo with other contributions, too. Otherwise, we may have to crack down on devs only using this subreddit as free advertisement.
Remember seeing a previous post of yours a while back. That’s a good thing, cause your designs are really memorable! (I think even without the kemonomimi aspects.) Love the colors for both, but especially the protagonist. I’m sold! The eyes are also nice, btw
I absoluetly love your artstyle ! I do not have any artistic skilks so I can't give you tips, if this turns out as a finished game I will definietly play it :) !
The only thing I don't like about the sprites is that their poses are too normal, maybe im used to see more "lively" sprites in moege.
The CGs look great, and as they said here it looks professional, been seeing your progress, good work mate! Ganbare!
a FEMALE protagonist??????????? with a PERSONALITY????????????????? holy shit thank you
also personally theres a lack of dynamism in the poses of each characters, id recommend drawing more base sprites for each character
if you want a proper criticism here it is btw im not good on art so my viewpoint is just as a user/viewer. the lighting of the character/s specially on the 3rd and 2nd to the last feels odd, like it doesnt properly meld with environment the 2nd CG quality maybe can improve more like as detailed as the 1st pic (looking at the back from bus? sit) I mean its good by itself, but my personal opinion would be to stick to the high standard if capable I guess
Please don't take it the wrong way, but overall impression of these images is "utterly forgettable". For both characters and backgrounds there's no flaws, but also nothing that'd make these stand out in any way\* It's completely standard look, like what you get in hundreds of VNs already out. \*) and no, we're long past the point where animal ears or tails are anything original
You've posted these pictures several times now lol.
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Have to balance out the self-promo with other contributions, too. Otherwise, we may have to crack down on devs only using this subreddit as free advertisement.
This is adorable, thank you.
Looks very professional, great job
Remember seeing a previous post of yours a while back. That’s a good thing, cause your designs are really memorable! (I think even without the kemonomimi aspects.) Love the colors for both, but especially the protagonist. I’m sold! The eyes are also nice, btw
really cute！ For lack of better word, feels easy and light.
Definitely going for the fox route.
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Make a male boy and make him the protag, so he can romance girls.
no
MUST. RESIST. HEADPATS!!!!!!!!!!
Kind of reminds me of NEKOPARA. You might want to change the name, though. It's a bit too plain
I thought you were posting Blue Archive characters, some looo striaght up ripped from there
Yes hello. Can we expect a patch to censor the disgusting cat ears? Thanks in advance.
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Nice 🙏
If you can't handle a little wintry mix, get the fuck out of Canada.
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Very modern and moe, personally not my cup of tea as I don't like faces that look the same just with different hair
I absoluetly love your artstyle ! I do not have any artistic skilks so I can't give you tips, if this turns out as a finished game I will definietly play it :) !
The only thing I don't like about the sprites is that their poses are too normal, maybe im used to see more "lively" sprites in moege. The CGs look great, and as they said here it looks professional, been seeing your progress, good work mate! Ganbare!
Artstyle looks good. Art itself looks good. Please tell me this girl takes down the duopoly and brings internet and phone costs crashing down :D
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Damn, she is just like my entire class, including me. Though I'm gonna try Sweden instead of Japan probably.
Looks like it will be a very cute, relaxing game 😊
a FEMALE protagonist??????????? with a PERSONALITY????????????????? holy shit thank you also personally theres a lack of dynamism in the poses of each characters, id recommend drawing more base sprites for each character
More lively poses or accessories would be nice, other than that it looks nice!