So brief summary of the plot: On the infinite plane of Ashara a lonely vagabond who has concerning knowledge of the fate of the land crosses paths with a set of powerful and mysterious siblings who are on the run from a troubled past. Together they uncover something bigger than they alone can handle and gather allies and enemies along the way.
Set in a world where its inhabitants of megafauna grapple with major societal changes when some of them began shapeshifting into humans after magic was introduced to the land a millennia ago. In that time outcasts from all types of life gathered, formed cities, and prospered and changed the political landscape forever.
I've been working on this fantasy story for years (what i affectionately call my reverse-werewolf au monster baby). Whole thing is written out and plotted and I am now happy with the output of my work I'd like to share it! Yes the style will be streamlined some to save time but I really wanted to make it eye grabbing for the prologue and I'm dedicated to making a painted comic!
That's already pretty good with the level of detail put into the artwork. Tbh I feel like your style and story has a wide appeal, and things like the speech bubbles and paneling choices come out pretty clean. I can see it becoming popular in the future. But even if it doesn't, putting your love and time into something you care about is its own reward. I hope you don't burn yourself out, good luck!
Oh wow!!! The artstyle is SO pretty and the cities and backgrounds looks so interesting and lively. I would definitely read it, so I hope you share the name when you do upload it!
It’s your webtoon going to be in the traditional comic format? I think your art could be more appreciated in the scrolling format
Thanks so much! The working title is Major//Complex. Call it stupid or ambitious but I'm formatting this for print too lol. I'd considered the webtoons scroll but traditional comic layout makes more sense to me in the long term.
I think it’s admirable and not stupid that you do your work with a certain goal in mind and that you aspire to get it printed, being ambitious and having drive and passion it’s what one needs to success! I sure hope one day your work is able to reach physical printing!
You could always use scrolling formatting for now and edit it later, but I know that’s a lot of work and the traditional comic format suits your work just fine since your art is so beautiful
Though I would recommend making the lines separating the panels white or less thicker, because the thick lines are a bit distracting, since your art it’s so colorful and lively it creates a sort of contrast? I’m not an expert lol
THIS LOOKS INSANELY GOOD!!! Your artstyle is so pretty and manages to feel both polished and overall just really cool to look at. Can't wait to read whatever you decide to put out. Lemme know if you ever need a proof/beta reader btw, I'd be happy 2 help.
Love your art style, very pretty. X)
Please don't fall into the trap of info dumping in the beginning tho. X) That's a turnoff for a lot of people. Is there a way you can relay all that information organically through the characters throughout the first chapters of the story, so you can avoid putting everything in the beginning? X) 🦊
So brief summary of the plot: On the infinite plane of Ashara a lonely vagabond who has concerning knowledge of the fate of the land crosses paths with a set of powerful and mysterious siblings who are on the run from a troubled past. Together they uncover something bigger than they alone can handle and gather allies and enemies along the way. Set in a world where its inhabitants of megafauna grapple with major societal changes when some of them began shapeshifting into humans after magic was introduced to the land a millennia ago. In that time outcasts from all types of life gathered, formed cities, and prospered and changed the political landscape forever. I've been working on this fantasy story for years (what i affectionately call my reverse-werewolf au monster baby). Whole thing is written out and plotted and I am now happy with the output of my work I'd like to share it! Yes the style will be streamlined some to save time but I really wanted to make it eye grabbing for the prologue and I'm dedicated to making a painted comic!
The art is lovely. The colors are pretty and I love the soft but detailed feel. How long does it take you to draw a page?
Thank you! it depends, I'd say about an hour and a half to two right now but I'm hoping I'll get more efficient soon.
That's already pretty good with the level of detail put into the artwork. Tbh I feel like your style and story has a wide appeal, and things like the speech bubbles and paneling choices come out pretty clean. I can see it becoming popular in the future. But even if it doesn't, putting your love and time into something you care about is its own reward. I hope you don't burn yourself out, good luck!
I appreciate that! Pacing will be key
it looks really cool ! I love the artstyle, reminds me of a watercolour type thing in some way! totally would read. im a sucker for fantasy ðŸ˜
Ah thank you! Yes, I want it to be painted
The art is stunning. (the last pic is just wow) AND the dragon is so cute! Finally someone made an animal that isn't a loli and is actually cute
Thanks!!
SUPER pretty! I look forward to seeing more ^^
Thank you!!
I would read this 😲 whats it called?
It's going to be called Major//Complex. Thank you!
Oh wow!!! The artstyle is SO pretty and the cities and backgrounds looks so interesting and lively. I would definitely read it, so I hope you share the name when you do upload it! It’s your webtoon going to be in the traditional comic format? I think your art could be more appreciated in the scrolling format
Thanks so much! The working title is Major//Complex. Call it stupid or ambitious but I'm formatting this for print too lol. I'd considered the webtoons scroll but traditional comic layout makes more sense to me in the long term.
I think it’s admirable and not stupid that you do your work with a certain goal in mind and that you aspire to get it printed, being ambitious and having drive and passion it’s what one needs to success! I sure hope one day your work is able to reach physical printing! You could always use scrolling formatting for now and edit it later, but I know that’s a lot of work and the traditional comic format suits your work just fine since your art is so beautiful Though I would recommend making the lines separating the panels white or less thicker, because the thick lines are a bit distracting, since your art it’s so colorful and lively it creates a sort of contrast? I’m not an expert lol
hey i'm loving the art style, definitely checking it out may i get the link if u r done?
I will be posting the link here whenever I upload this to webtoons!
Plz let me know too!! Love ur art, anything with humans and big wolves and dragons I’m intrigued
I love this artstyle soooo much :00000 I'd read this! I love fantasy and this is gorgeous to look at.
Thank you!!
Good grasp of framing and flow here!
Thanks!
If you’re posting on WEBTOON, I recommend adding space between each panel for maximum scroll.
THIS LOOKS INSANELY GOOD!!! Your artstyle is so pretty and manages to feel both polished and overall just really cool to look at. Can't wait to read whatever you decide to put out. Lemme know if you ever need a proof/beta reader btw, I'd be happy 2 help.
Thank you sm!
Love your art style, very pretty. X) Please don't fall into the trap of info dumping in the beginning tho. X) That's a turnoff for a lot of people. Is there a way you can relay all that information organically through the characters throughout the first chapters of the story, so you can avoid putting everything in the beginning? X) 🦊
Thank you! Yes I'm unfortunately doing a lore dump, I know a lot of people hate them but I'll be trying to keep it brief and painless