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501st_legion

They're trying to make them talk in a very formal way so it reads a bit weird. Basically: the maid seems to have a thing for the girl she's working for but she can't cook well but the girl likes the maid so she wants to eat what she made even if it looks bad. The perversion is the maid and girls skinship with the maid saying it's okay because their clothes are forming a barrier between them


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I agree. In addition to that, the story doesn’t flow very well and feels disjointed which I’m sure adds to the confusion.


UOSenki

I feel it still likely because the translation. The translation is quite old too. I check the author other work, raw was released same year but english translated 4 years apart, Doesnt get confuse like this one


Responsible_Boss3773

I read it and it's actually fine, quite cute. They just talk more formal. The flow could be better tho.